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What Leo said. Trust me, they wouldn't be the first potential couple to jump into things too soon and be a bit weirded out after. Their reactions will be explored in the new chapter just posted.
I was fearing this story since I saw it on the New Stories list, since usually M = clop.
And yeah, it's a clopfic.
And I usually don't read clopfics.
But I still read it. And liked it.
...what is wrong with me?
can't wait for new chapters
5912773 i feel you m8
Why so many downvotes?
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I consider it high compliment that non-cloppers like the story! Nothing's wrong you for it... you just appreciate (what I think) is a well-written story with good character development and storyline, one where the sex serves the story as much the other way around. But regardless of why you like it, I'm very glad you do. Welcome and enjoy.
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I got a slew of downvotes on Friday's initial release, and a steady trickle since until today.
People downvoted it for the subject matter and/or ship alone without ever reading it. Human/pony is a big no-no for some folks, cross-universe character ships are for others. Mostly, I'm guessing they had a visceral and very negative reaction to seeing Twilight/Phoenix shipped and thumbed down the story on the basis of that alone. Nothing I can do about that unfortunately, except try to rack up the upvotes as well and ask folks to spread the word that this is, in fact, a good story. And releasing the Turnabout Storm epilogue was key to all that, because that's where my willing reader pool is coming from right now.
I won't let the downvotes get me down, especially with the love I'm seeing for the story today with a ton of new upvotes and faves. Thanks for reading, and the story won't stop!
Whoooo! Caught up, and dang... Celly you sly minx, methinks you had some fun times back in the human world 8'D
CACKLES LOUDLY!
Keep it up boi!
5913022 ill put the clop asside
Like its a CROSSOVER! Plus i was actually expecting that
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The Kraken is free! Davy Jones Locker greet ye warmly me hearties!
5912983 Huge controversy before the story released. A vocal minority hated the shipping and thought Firesight was a war criminal for adding it. Some of the downvotes were no doubt concerted given the ways the statistics worked out. It doesn't even matter now. People are reading it and accepting it for the great story that it is, and that's all that matters!
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Welcome!
And keep up the good work dude!
Wow! So far this is coming pretty good! Keep up the good work.
Awesome job!
Celestia takes the form of a human to get intimate with a human? Awesome!
I wonder, if she ever found a human that made love to her as a pony? XD
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I don't think you have, but I'm working on Part 3's commentary and it'll probably be up in a few minutes depending on if I fall asleep or not, and how fast I can read the chapter.
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Seconded!!!!! : I love these running commentaries, ShadowLDrago!
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She is. At the time of Justice For All, Maya was 18, Phoenix 25. Pearly, for the record, was 8.
You have no idea yet how much.
Oh, she's still the master on that score, as Twilight is going to find out...
For now.
Wet blanket.
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So he's 7 years older than her, wow, nearly a decade.
Elaborate.
Goodie. Wonder how Trollestia would do against the King of Trolls, Discord? Probably not well if Return of Harmony's any indications.
Fair enough.
Killjoy.
Cool.
You're a good friend.
Ah yes, motherly Celestia, my favorite Celestia.
Eh?
Fair enough.
So she knows the spell too. Nice.
I think you broke her.
I don't know why this made me laugh so much.
I see.
That makes two of us.
<last part>
"Such.... such a strong killing aura...."
5914258 Next chapter, you'll be even more glad you're not in Maya's shoes... at least for one part of it.
5915550 Maya: Sparkle... Gravity isn't something that'll just 'break'. It's a cosmic force.
But...
Vinyl: Chillax, would ya, Sparks? Enjoy the local scenery!
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Considering Mia Fey is the epitome of Beware the Nice Ones in the Ace Attorney universe, and she's currently not particularly pleased with Maya, I'll believe that.
Looking good so far. Your able to write romance very believably.
Heh, while Phoenix was worrying about Twilight, I almost expected a prosecutor to come out of nowhere and say "Oh, it looks like you've forgotten the most important detail." and once Wright asks what that is, the prosecutor would say that Twilight is still Twilight, then Wright would have to present evidence to prove the claim, and then the EPIC MUSIC PLAYS IN THE BACKGROUND!... or, you know, something like that.
And again, I can't help but wonder: How would Kay feact to Edgeworth being involved with Rarity? In fact... how WOULD she react to magical talking ponies? I bet she and Pinkie Pie would really hit it off... Say, maybe THAT'S who Pinkie Pie represents! They're both energetic women who eagerly pursue their vocation that provide comedic assistance, while carrying a more serious layer underneath... heh, kinda got off-topic there.
... Lol, Celestia
Heheheh... oh, I can only IMAGINE how much Mia is tearing into Maya! She's been slightly Ooc for far too long now. Time for the girl who likes Steel Samurai, Hamburgers, and teasing Phoenix once and for all!!!... That isn't to say we haven't seen it before in these fics, BUT... she's never seemed to be a vindictive sort, you know? In any case, it's time for the real OTP: Franzworth!... er, I mean, Wriris!... dang, there are a lot of OTP's in the Ace Attorney universe... The one with the purple unicorn and the spiky-haired lawyer!
Meh. I don't like their justifications. I mean, they didn't do anything wrong, so I agree with them on that front. However the question of whether he liked twilight for being human isn't I easily glossed over. At this point twilight and pheonix do not know if they could be with each other in their natural bodies. And that IS a question that is important. I don't think it is fair to either to commit to a relationship where they need to change their body to be something they aren't. That's what I found odd about celestias logic. Umm, if your new bod makes you like or do something that is natural for you to normally do, then that is something to at least THINK about. Also, I felt like you almost had a good line of thought to go down, with humans are pretty much always in heat, but you didn't use it.
Hang on. In Chapter 4, why does Phoenix use an Equestrian swear word in his head? It's an M rated story, surely we can drop the F-bomb already...
Well that happened...
Oh thank celestia fimnly some ones going to smack so sense in the hypocritical cock blocking bitch
I don't know where the "doesn't know what is happening" thing comes from.
There was a clear allusion to the sensitivity of horns and wings/flight muscles, so she was told explicitly what it would be like beforehand and she herself made the offer.
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I don’t follow. Knowing her pony sensitivities does not mean she knows her human ones, and regardless, she did NOT plan to do anything with him as a human. She thought that would be intrinsically false because she wouldn’t be herself, like she claimed to Vinyl and Celly. So I think her reaction makes perfect sense given what she knew and didn’t know.