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Well, she seems a little needy for Pheonix, otherwise it's fine. Don't know if five weeks is enough to start her going crazy =P. Well.....it IS twilight a first love, but the words just seem a little awkward. Carry on!
I have to agree with ArcaneVisions, she does seem a bit needy considering its only been bout five weeks.
But other then that this is looking like a good story so far.
Nice job so far!
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Since two people have now said that, I've turned down the neediness level down a bit in the chapter proper. Thanks!
This looks like an interesting start. I'm intrigued.
i probably asked already, but is this the sequel, from the same story, that i probably saw on youtoube, or is this your own pheonix wright story?
To be honest i can´t really wait to read the newest chapter already, but if there is enough new, and much to read about their romance in the other story, then i read the first one too.
I just don´t like it if i read something that i already know about, this is why i ask, if there is much new, maybe i can even skip the cases.
what is with twilight and monkey dick, but at least this time shes not cradle robbing. unless she goes after trucy too.
Faved, tracking and thumbed up before even reading a syllable.
Hmm... This should be interesting...
So, can you simply watch the Turnabout Storm youtube series and be caught to to read this sequel?
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Not really, sorry. This story is a sequel to the unofficial novelization as opposed to the videos.
What’s the difference? The novelization dramatically expands the original video story and adds a lot additional scenes and subplots, including a Twilight/Phoenix Wright ship and an extended ending to help deal with it. This story picks up where that left off.
Though I’ve had a few people read this and enjoy it even without reading the novelization, it is nonetheless recommended. The videos are a good primer for the novelization, at least, and highly recommended as well.
Tres Bien outfit, anyone?
Armstrong...what the hell were you thinking...
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So really, it's a choice between a more condensed (but still long - about 9 hours) video series with pretty damn faithful animations (and animation rips), background art, script-writing and voice-acting, or a more fleshed-out novella that lacks the same 'familiar hits' due to not being animated, but is better suited for being enjoyed on the go (on the bus, train or car trip).
Both are good and recommended in their own ways, but this only follows on from the novella's extra scenes. Tough choice there, in my opinion...
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I hated that case. Probably my least favorite for the third game.
Well, my not-so-humble opinion is that that novelization is better overall, both in terms of content and flow. I took pains to plug some plot holes and gave the trial a new extended ending where Trixie parries his arguments at the point he forced Sonata to confess, forcing Phoenix to find a new avenue of attack. The videos had to match the games, and that’s fine, but this medium gave me considerably more freedom to do things.
Yep. From the sound of it, you’ve seen the videos, but not read TAS. Like I said, I’ve had people enjoy this without reading the novelization, but it is nonetheless recommended. Not just for the ship, but for the bonus cases, characters, and content that accompanied it, all of which this builds on. At its core, this story is half Ace Attorney trial and half crossover clopfic, with a lot of worldbuilding woven into both. Each can be enjoyed on their own merits, certainly, but it helps to know just who or what being referred to and how they got to this point.
I should also note there’s a T-rated version of this story on my story page if you prefer that instead of the adult one.
It rains pretty good during the monsoon season. The rest of the time it follows the conventions of your typical desert; heat, dry wind and sunny skies.
There should be a test that before you write the proposed Edgeworth/Rarity shipfic, you need to come up with the best possible line for Edgeworth in reply to driving his red Audi. Sadly, nothing immediately comes to mind meaning I'm probably not the right guy. Edgeworth is much harder than write than one would think.
One's a sweet ride, the other is an epic mount! (WoW kids will understand this reference)
And you're going to LOVE ITTTTT!
If Firefly gets the accidental FoE reference, Turnabout Storm and TLaTU get the accidental Pony Waifu Sim reference. Fit Twilight gets referenced last chapter and this chapter mentions a human getting an unwanted gift from Rarity that looks way too flashy. Personally, I'd love to wear something that's covered with diamonds and silver.
I loved the story is there going to be a another chapter of this story thank you for this story
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Thank you! I very much appreciate you saying so.
Well, I would like there to be more to this, and plans for a sequel do exist, but the problem is that my writing plate is really full right now. I just have too many writing projects at the moment to work on at once, so I have to pick and choose, focusing on just one or two things at a time to make sure I don't get overwhelmed or suffer burnout.
Currently, my choice of stories to work on is Feathered Hearts: Continuation and Chronicles, and the near-total revamp of the very M-rated Unleash the Magic: Midnight Rising story. I'm also overdue for a full editing pass on this story; I started it but only got through the first five chapters before my attention went elsewhere. It's just another task on the pile right now, unfortunately.
For the time being, I would simply invite you to check out my other stories if you haven't already, as you'll find more story-driven M-rated goodness in them. If you liked how it worked here, then check out Unleash the Magic: Nightmare Night, which is arguably my wildest and most story-driven clopfic yet. Head for my story page to see them.