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Eclipses are one of the most sacred events in Equestria, symbolizing the union of night and day. As such Twilight gathers the element bearers to observe the event, but instead of a beautiful crossing of the sun and moon, bizarre monsters, the likes of which never before seen by pony kind, crawl from the Everfree just as Twilight and her friends lose the powers that they each hold. Luckily, A group shows up with their own powers, powers that the ponies themselves begin to awaken to. The power of Persona.

Cover art by JazzyQ

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

You have caught my interest. I'll love to see more of this.

Ooh, ooh, just in time for my b-day too! Great start, now get going and write the next chapter!

5908043 well happy birthday:twilightsmile: and don't you worry. I'm working on chapter 2 right now.

*Nods head thoughtfully* Ok. I like this.

So as I read this, I see Persona 4 (viva Margret) but that chapter title had me thinking Persona 3 (cause you know the envoker in the shape of a gun). I'm going to lend on Persona 4 side for now do to the fact that
1. Summoning Persona is easier for ponies because they don't have to fumble with guns.
2. Margret yet again.
3 While the concept of the Everfree being a parallel to Tartarus in P3, the setting is much more light heart much like P4 (despite the murder case that needs to be solved.)

The best part of this is that i just finished the let's plays of both P3 and P4 so I feel like Im ready for this. All I got to ask is.... Who are the people joining our little poines?

Psst. If you bring Kanji in here i will be laughing so hard through out this story, Just a warning.... :P

5910432 Let's just say... In the human world, the events of P4AU happened literally minutes before.:twilightsmile:

5910468 The events as just starting or just ending?
Also I assume the AU is alternate universe. Cause if so don't answer, I know the answer.

5914456

OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH..... okay then i need to find a lp of that so i know what is happening then. :P

Hrmmm... I feel like this is a bit rushed....
First off. I can understand Twilight doing mimicking The P3 hero's first summon with the mad smile... I just expected a bit more... well confused result as she was doing it... Kinda like a "What the buck am I doing?" deal.
Second, for some reason I am very upset that the rest (minus Dash and Spike) also can summon off the bat... maybe its because in the games it takes a while for the party to fully come together...
Third, while you did say that this after AU... why is Akihiko still in a school uniform? Plus, shouldn't Labrys be with the group?
In my honest opinion i feel like this is more like an addition to Persona Q than after AU. But meh Im just being a pain, sorry if I offended ya.

Also keep this up! I still want to see where this goes.

5932928 Everything will be explained don't you worry:raritywink:

Well done! Now explain what the P3 and P4 casts are doing in the Everfree Forest.

Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

All three Social Link make sense and seeing how Sunset Shimmer is still in Human land to begin with... I think we wouldn't see this one grow any further. Well outside the magic phone book at least. :P

Also, as a hunch, I think we might have an interaction between Twilight and Yu inside the Velvet Room, just a hunch though :P.

I'm guessing Naoto is gonna be in this if all of the two casts are in this?


Naoto is my favorite so excuse me if I get excited.


*Faint fangirling is heard*

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