Brad is not your ordinary kid. being 18 years old would change that indeed. He is very 'In tune' with nature, having an uncanny ability to comprehend animals and to help them with their troubles. He is Kind to a fault, preferring animals over people any day of the week. Thrown into equestria by strange lightning, he must find the six harmony stones and activate them, passing their trials and locate the scepter to be granted one wish. Not to mention that he is also 20 years in the past, prior to the season one premiere.
Join Brad in his journey as he lives through the mane sixes childhoods in pursuit of these artifacts.
Credit due to Dash attack for the story idea and inspiration to create my own version! check his out!
Artwork drawn for my story by Justice Berglund on deviantart. (click picture source for bigger picture)
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5873829 I actually have the second chapter waiting to be submitted. I'll go ahead and post it for ya.
Alright....
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I'm still trying to figure out what the video says in relation to my story. I can't tell if you think it is good or not... Hard to say
Your story description field should contain the long description and the credit for another writer, and that's it. (The short description has its own area and can be found by people who actually care about such things.) Generally, the credit appears at the bottom, not at the top.
A request for art is normally done through one's blog, or the appropriate group on the site, not in the description. If you feel you must have it, that should go at the very bottom, below the writer credit.
In short, your description is doing it all wrong. I have no desire to read this. I'm not even going to get into the issue of another human called into Equestria to save the world...
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Well as disheartened as I am to hear this, I am thankful that you were not rude about it. I take your words to heart.
And to be honest, I find your concern of it being yet another human being called to save the world rather funny. Hehe. Mostly since it is true though.
Good story, feels like light hearted adventure right now, but it does feel like it is rushed at parts in particular where he so suddenly finds another element so soon after completing his first trial. But I like the story so far!
7482226 thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. Honestly, i thought about just taking all of my stories down or rewriting them all, this one in particular. I don't really remember this story very well though. Lol. I don't know what i'm saying anymore.
continue it also don't make a story if you are not going to complete it that is just a waste of a good story
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I wrote these stories years ago. I was young and inexperienced. I made no thought out plans for any of the stories. Most of them were straight up terrible. Flow and grammar were horrendous. Look no further than my story "abnormalities" to see why. That story is a complete mess.
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Whoops, correction. Wolf situations is the story I was refering to. As for why I even wanted to write it. It was based on the song "monster" by imagine dragons.
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im not letting you leave this story incomplete
no this story is good
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I agree that this story has more potential than the others, but I still have no plans to write any time soon. I'm working long days and typically only have time to do other things such as writing on weekends. But even then, I would rather fill my time with youtube or audio books. I appreciate that you think my stories are so good.
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The only story I have any intention of continuing, though I plan to completely rewrite it, would be "the natural elements" its the story of mine with a hiatus tag while the others are canceled.