>>625276625276 Are you fucking serious? Take your spam shit somewhere else.

>>625693625693

thanks for yelling at the spammer. I deleted his/her comment. I hope you like the story

>>626308626308 Thanks. I read your story and I must say while it isn't bad there are a few things you can work on. Like the fact most of this story is a huge block of text, try and make paragraphs more frequent but not too frequent. I recommend just reading other fics on this site to see how they're formatted. The story isn't the most original but it has potential, try and get a pre-reader/editor. They help a LOT.

>>626541626541

ok. I originally had this on DV art and people seemed to like it so i posted it here as well.

>>626552626552 People on deviantart, no offence to them I love that website, aren't always the best with stories. A lot of them know their art well but not story formats and stuff. On this website you will get a a lot of people who do know what they're talking about so in that case this website is better for honest opinions.

oh well i hope you continue

Novanplz here, in my identity as Castor. Excellent work! And good luck on the rest!

>>626830626830

I will. thanks

>>626861626861 thank you

>>626840626840

thanks

>>626874626874 No prob!

cant wait for the next chapter

>>629602629602

nice to see someone on here who likes it. and thanks for the fav

Certainly an interesting fic, though I'm curious as to what exactly is going on here, which is definitely a good thing.

>>16342641634264

thanks. I really need to get the next chapter out but in a mix of being grounded,writers block, and sheer lack of motivation its not comin along to well

>>16354481635448

Same happened to me on pieces of time, but I have another story which is much more enjoyable, considering leaving the story up for the sheer fact that it's my first (EVAR!!) story...

Ow.

>>20199932019993

yeah

Moat please!

>>20735862073586

thanks. kinda grounded atm but i will try to get more up. btw your comment made me grin