Steve and Hwnt is a series the mlgHwnt does of which Steve finds himself able to talk to his in-game Minecraft Character.
Hwnt has made his way out of Minecraft and finds a file within Steves computer containing all the episodes of My Little Pony. He blackmails Steve using this knowledge but is sucked into the world.
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5847237 That makes me sad, now time to jack off to ponies.
5847237 DAMN!!!
I haven't even read any of this, but it cant be that bad!
5847237 ok I cant even read the first paragraph.
You were right.
5847459 Have you seen the actual skits? That's how Benny talks. Lol
5847495 Who the hell is Benny?!?
5847503 He's part human and part, something. Tbh Idk. But only Steve and Hwnt understand him. Though his serotonin levels are that same when he kills someone and when he goes home to eat.
5847511 Can I ask, how old are you?
5847514 11 why
5847514 How about u?
5847521 Ah yes. That was to be expected.
5847526 I see why you asked there.
5847627 Me 3. I spent 30 minutes on this. On the toilet...in the bathroom...in the public
5847647 Hahaha, I wasn't being mean. I'm just saying I can see why he asked. I am not disrespecting your story in any way. I like the concept you have used just needs work that's all.
5847668 I know, if I came on to strong. It's your fault, I'm tall and weigh a lot and if I'm came on that would crush the daylight out of you. Light. Why is the a gh in it? What does that even sound like? If it's silent then I could wright
Ghghghghghghghghhgghgghghghghghgghghghgh <<<<< best fic ever writen
5847676 I think you need a pre-reader, a proof-read and an editor at this stage or read some fic writing guides that are out there.
5847237 Okay this time that was fucking funny hahah
5847703 He needs an English Teacher.
5847730 I'm sure he's in education, but all he needs to do is correct his work rather than posting it first hand
You are forgetting he is dyslexic
5847731 Same. Though I check my work constantly to make sure it's right.
Seriously 30 times I re-read my stuff. Even then it has errors.
5847738 Really? I just check my twice send it to my friends who proof-read it and I'm good to go :P If you ever need an extra set of eyes ask me
5847749 my only other friend that'll put up with my pony shit isn't very good with English, or working quickly lol.
I do have two I'm working with ATM, so I might just ask you for some help. Send me a friend or whatever this site does to keep track of people.
5847778 I guess thats a follow haha Or something :P GET ON IT FIMFICTION ADD FRIENDS
5847783 please?
lol
5847793 I will PM you my skype for reference if I'm not online on FiMFiction. and please?
5847805 'please' as in in we need friends or a friend like thing.
Alright. I'll send you my Skype too.
5847816 Oh haha yeah
5847526 And I'm 10. Who cares about ages XD
5847730
/black woman: He needs Jesus!
5847968
Those of us old enough to understand why it matters, rather than dismissing it because they don't like the fact that their age limits them and other people keep bringing it up, deciding age doesn't matter so they don't have to suffer a bruised ego.
Basically, all of us were like you when we were 10. Then we grew up and realized how freaking dumb we used to be. When you get to be my age you'll look back and cringe, trust me on this.
Also, my review.
This is bad. I can't tell if you're trolling or not. You seem to be. If so, good job. r8 8/8.
If this is serious, you need a lot of help to improve before trying again when you've got a solid grasp of the language and writing essentials down. Also that we generally don't like Minecraft crossovers so much as we don't mind ponies playing Minecraft. But a Minecraft self-insert? Hrrrgh.
When the fandom was first starting out, we got a lot of shit from the Minecraft fandom constantly harassing us, so... there's a bit of history there.
Seek out assistance to grow into your literary talents, and come back with a real page-turner instead of a page-burner, and we'll gladly welcome your work.
WTF did I just read? Just made an account to comment its that bad
5848010 Personally, I take that as an insult, because I think my writings good for my age, but thats my problem
5848599
That had nothing to with writing, it was the way you view age. You kind of proved my point there by taking it as an insult and misunderstanding me at the same time. I haven't seen your writing, so I can't judge its successes or failures. Thus I would not speak negatively about them.
5848641 Okai!
5847731 i don't go to school silly, I'm 11 I haven't been in school since I moved which was 6yrs ago
5848014 History?
5848010 2.bp.blogspot.com/-ufmGXTLfujE/U9AWMUAl8fI/AAAAAAAAUXY/BqXTuzIjaGM/s1600/he's+right+you+know.jpg
I hate to be rude, but there's a little thing called grammar...
5848775 not sure where you moved, but if it's America, you and your parents are breaking the law.
Isn't this why there's an age limit on this site?
You fanfiction sucks, deal with it. I feel dumber from reading this.
Never. Again.
I was taking a shit whilst reading it and before I wiped, I look down into the depths of the toilet bowl and thought '' this story is shitter than my shit. Should I put my phone in the shit so the story will belong with its own kind?'' In the end I did not want to as my phone is not shit its gold unlike this story. Absolute shit!
5856387
5856387 Once u go black u can't never go back
5856551 I would suck a fart out your butthole. Let me eat your shit.
5862693 kid you are twelve, i feel sorry for your parents
5878025 Im 13 it ok doe cause I suck my dads DEEZ NUTS
5849258 Love and toler8 through it
shity story
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