Rainbow Dash promised soon as she got out of the academy, to tell her to meet her at the lake. When she arrives Rainbow, and Applejack has a chat for the night.
Note: I changed it because people didn't like the original. Hope you like this one
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You need an editor. Otherwise, it was a half-decent story. Except the romance was overshadowed by Dash's complaints, and Dash comes off as annoying. Tell me, did you struggle with the 1000 word minimum?
5841594 yeah a lot
5842626 If I could make a suggestion, try decribing the setting, the birds whistling, the warm sun, etc.
5843589 thx I will edit it later thx u so much for the suggestion. Ur the only person who has offered something that will make the story a little better then my original
Awesome love your work