• Member Since 15th Oct, 2014
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PonyWrites


Totally gay. Likes to give critiques even though you probably didn't ask. I am an English Major, after all.

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By some fortune, Shining Armor was on leave and decided to return to Ponyville to talk to his Little Sister Best Friend Forever, Twilight Sparkle, just as the group went to fight the equalists spread friendship.

He is greeted instead by his dragon-bro, who informs him of his limited knowledge of the situation. A few mugs of cider and a poorly placed bet later, Big Mac shows up.

It is the author's expressed opinion that a good time was had by all.


This is the first story I've submitted anywhere, but don't be gentle. I actually want to know why it sucks (or if it doesn't). I wrote this just before the season premier, but then I realized I could change a tiny plot point, and it would be half-way canon.

rated T for mild colt-cuddling... and maybe a few swear words, I can't remember.
Oh, and poor taste in humor.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

:raritystarry: Spikey come back!

I have MY needs :moustache: get it?

That. Was. Beautiful
There needs to be a second chapter my good sir, this is story is legendary

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Actually this was meant to be a one shot. It was marked incomplete as an error. I don't feel comfortable expanding the premise because this chapter will likely have a different tone from Spike traveling the world.
I can still keep it comedic, don't worry.

Glad people actually like it.
Guess I'll have to work on a sequel. It's not like I was doing anything else.

Oh my god, yes, that was awesome. HOOFBALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!:trollestia:

I approve of the story

Have a moustache :moustache:

I really like the premise, particularly Spike's ID crisis, but next time could you double space? It was hard to read.

I will say that the bit about colt-cuddling kind of threw me off my game, I came around to ignore it a bit and just went reading it.

Had some laughs, enjoyed watching bros, being bros and characters developed some.

Also that last bit with Rarity and Spike was Gold. :pinkiesmile:

Overall enjoyable and something I'd probably read again when I feel like it

:moustache:

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Tell your friends! I consider this the better of my two published works. Honestly I was just bored. I needed to give Mac something to talk about. There were other ways I could have played it better for comedy, but I was so proud of my wittle story I wanted to show the whole world. :twilightsmile:

The irony being the other story (I'm not either) got waaay more popularity.

well that escalated quickly

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