This was challenging. The number of perspectives and trying not to overdue certain things was definitely a obstacle. There was a lot to consider, and thank Luna for magic that allow me to do certain things. I heard a lot of guesses for this chapter, but it seems not too many of you expected this. We have one final chapter of the main story to go. In hindsight, this chapter has been one hell of a climax.
I believe I have fulfilled my promise,
Clopfic full of 3 ways and a super special ending! Your gonna wanna stick around for this one folks to find out how Spike is Luna's greatest gift to mare kind.
even if it isn't over yet. My wording there, not the best.
I'd like to quote something I said to IC tonight
Sex is primal, natural, not every aspect is always overly romantic. That's the difference between feeling cheesy or feeling realistic. It has to be a mix.
The primal may be the attraction and the excitement of sex, but it is not what makes it beautiful. The sincerity and intimacy is what makes it beautiful.
Sex does not turn all mindless. Quite the opposite: some are so confused, so unsure, that their minds think too much.
Some women like it tender, and some like it rough. It is foolish to believe that all women fall into either category, as there are many in-betweens.
It may surprise you which one is which. Still, you have a long way to go before you get there. You have yet, actually, to prove your statement. I won't, as yet, say why, but you have not arrived.
I want you to take pleasure in the fact that I am clopping relentlessly to this story, I've had to call my doctor and the fire department several times due to a very painful occurence called 'Fire Crotch'. Who knew stories could be so hot that they could potentially cause your genitalia to spontaneously combust, not me apparently.
2243157 Well after having it happen over 7 times you tend to go with it and take measures to dissolve the situation, ergo the multiple bottles of water I have right next to me currently
His future was bright, not simple or easy, but bright.
Damn right...Six wives and a minimum of six children(that could be anywhere to 2-3 per wife making 6-18 kirins) and six jobs. In four generations 45-50% Ponyville's population will have some kind of draconic blood in them.
A lovely penultimate chapter for one of my favorite clopfics! It's good to see you publishing again. Maybe we can get a look at this Punishment Game story you've had floating around for some time now.
a month every four where there’s no schedule to allow for random romance.
I think somepony missed an edit.
Heat had built up fine on its own with all of the stimulation, but the fire-blasted claw was utterly different, alien. Her fantasies tried to grasp what having it inside of her like that might feel, even how where inside of her would effect it, but she needed to experience it.
YES! FIRE SEX! FUCK YOU ISSAC!
And what a wonderful read. You said you would delievered and you did. Can't wait to see the conclusion of this. All I hope is that IC doesn't take forever this time. And beofre you respond defending yourself let me tell you something: cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/27567326.jpg
Hail to The Dragon King! Fluttershy is really kinky, so it's true what they say 'it's always the quiet ones' i would love to see everyone's reactions to Spike harem, Garble and the gang, Celestia, Big Mac, the cakes, CMC everyone! i cant wait to read more
Wow. I'm a little depressed right now due to the death of a family friend, but I had another idea for a different story.
Warrior will STILL be continued (first to be updated before my newest planned Sparity fic), just working on editing chapter 2, just have to get over the depression right now.
The newest story will be called Spike no Rin'negan: The eye of a God. I saw the Rin'negan in a manga and saw the unbelievable power it granted. A villain gained those eyes after seeing his parents get killed (which is why he turned bad), but ended up sacrificing his life to help his teacher's newest pupil. Ironically enough, he, his teacher, and the newest pupil had the same dream; peace in the war-torn lands. He even compared his life to a book: The teacher was the first book, the one that started everything. I would be the sequel that would most likely ruin the series, but you...become the third book, and shine brighter than the previous ones.
However, the one who manipulated him stole his left eye after death after killing his friend.
I thought, "what if his friend took the right eye and tried to find a place to hide it, but was caught by that guy when she went back to hide the left?"
Also, they have a teleportation technique that must be learned properly. If she panicked, she could go anywhere....even Equestria....
Also, I had a couple changes. "Dragon Quest" in my mind for the story, happened three weeks before the Canterlot Wedding. The biggest change though is that Spike....looses his right eye to Garble (the red dragon) saving the egg.
That's when the "villan's" friend, Konan, stepped in while they were unconscious and Spike was in the hospital. He had the determination to do what was right, he could figure out how to use the Rin'negan's power properly.
The Powers granted by the eye: mastery of fire spells mastery of wind, lightning, water, and earth spells.
Sorry about that. I'm not thinking too quickly these days.
Anyways, I was listening to music, and reading Spike's "inner dilemma" about how he was going to well, handle six mares, really brought some of the inner dilemma ideas about what is right and wrong in my future planned story to life and brought forward ideas and potential conflicts I hadn't thought of.
I actually am a huge fan of ALL of your stories-whether I get time to review or not tends to be seen, as this-for example-I had to leave immediately after my last review, so I couldn't go on about how I loved the fact you really brought out the characters and their personalities without going overboard. I can really learn from works like this.
Damn, when you come back with a update, you come back strong! Hell of a amazing job as always Cloud. Oh, and try not to hurt your editor too much, they still have many more stories to work on, which I am still very, very eager to read.
Almost forgot, I did notice that you didn't separate the POV's of the Mane 6 with a boarder when it came to each one describing there own sexually experience. Just thought I should say that because it's not something I normally see happening I your stories.
2249715Just checked, don't know why I doubted you. Well that does show how long it's been since we got a update from you. Think it's time I go read some of those stories again to catch up.
FUCK YEAH YOU MOTHER FUCKING SON OF A BITCH MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF AWESOME FUCKING SHIT!!! Do you wanna know what I say to this? Final attack ride: A-A-A-A-A-A-AWESOME!!! BUT ONCE AGAIN, FUCK YEAH YOU MOTHER FUCKING SON OF A BITCH MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF FUCKING AWESOME SHIT!!!
Full circle
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This was challenging. The number of perspectives and trying not to overdue certain things was definitely a obstacle. There was a lot to consider, and thank Luna for magic that allow me to do certain things. I heard a lot of guesses for this chapter, but it seems not too many of you expected this. We have one final chapter of the main story to go. In hindsight, this chapter has been one hell of a climax.
I believe I have fulfilled my promise,
even if it isn't over yet. My wording there, not the best.
I'd like to quote something I said to IC tonight
Now excuse me as I kill IC.
The primal may be the attraction and the excitement of sex, but it is not what makes it beautiful. The sincerity and intimacy is what makes it beautiful.
Sex does not turn all mindless. Quite the opposite: some are so confused, so unsure, that their minds think too much.
Some women like it tender, and some like it rough. It is foolish to believe that all women fall into either category, as there are many in-betweens.
It may surprise you which one is which. Still, you have a long way to go before you get there. You have yet, actually, to prove your statement. I won't, as yet, say why, but you have not arrived.
I want you to take pleasure in the fact that I am clopping relentlessly to this story, I've had to call my doctor and the fire department several times due to a very painful occurence called 'Fire Crotch'. Who knew stories could be so hot that they could potentially cause your genitalia to spontaneously combust, not me apparently.
2243114
This blurs the line between TMI and funny.
Six on a single night, i wonder what celestia will say to this... i really loved this chapter.
2243114 You seem deep in thought over the matter.
2243157
Well after having it happen over 7 times you tend to go with it and take measures to dissolve the situation, ergo the multiple bottles of water I have right next to me currently
" Pinkie shoot into the air"
Should be shot.
Damn right...Six wives and a minimum of six children(that could be anywhere to 2-3 per wife making 6-18 kirins) and six jobs. In four generations 45-50% Ponyville's population will have some kind of draconic blood in them.
Spectacular chapter cloud. Definitely looking forward to the one-on-one chapters and the other possible threesomes.
Commence read.
And the foreshadowing at the end.
Spike went for the goal and scored.
2243114 Me too. A very painful experience indeed.
A lovely penultimate chapter for one of my favorite clopfics! It's good to see you publishing again. Maybe we can get a look at this Punishment Game story you've had floating around for some time now.
I think somepony missed an edit.
YES! FIRE SEX! FUCK YOU ISSAC!
And what a wonderful read. You said you would delievered and you did. Can't wait to see the conclusion of this. All I hope is that IC doesn't take forever this time. And beofre you respond defending yourself let me tell you something:
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Oh hey... it updated... ._.
Okay that just came to my mind when I saw this. But I'm too busy now, gonna read it at some point today or tomorrow.
Hail to The Dragon King!
Fluttershy is really kinky, so it's true what they say 'it's always the quiet ones'
i would love to see everyone's reactions to Spike harem, Garble and the gang, Celestia, Big Mac, the cakes, CMC everyone!
i cant wait to read more
It's Everfree, not Evergreen.
Other than that little mistake:
F*CK YEAH!!! AN UPDATE!!!
Spike truly deserves all the mares.
2243145 Damn That emoticon needs sunglasses!
2243198
2243379 One day. Time should be a bit less constricting now.
2243461 I don't see the mistake... Needs more candle wax
He isn't doing the next one. There's no need.
2243784
2243791
2244307 How the hell did three of us miss that multiple times!?
2243484
Good job, Cloud!
You too, Spike!
Fantastic. Utterly fantastic.
Wow. I'm a little depressed right now due to the death of a family friend, but I had another idea for a different story.
Warrior will STILL be continued (first to be updated before my newest planned Sparity fic), just working on editing chapter 2, just have to get over the depression right now.
The newest story will be called Spike no Rin'negan: The eye of a God. I saw the Rin'negan in a manga and saw the unbelievable power it granted. A villain gained those eyes after seeing his parents get killed (which is why he turned bad), but ended up sacrificing his life to help his teacher's newest pupil. Ironically enough, he, his teacher, and the newest pupil had the same dream; peace in the war-torn lands. He even compared his life to a book: The teacher was the first book, the one that started everything. I would be the sequel that would most likely ruin the series, but you...become the third book, and shine brighter than the previous ones.
However, the one who manipulated him stole his left eye after death after killing his friend.
I thought, "what if his friend took the right eye and tried to find a place to hide it, but was caught by that guy when she went back to hide the left?"
Also, they have a teleportation technique that must be learned properly. If she panicked, she could go anywhere....even Equestria....
Also, I had a couple changes. "Dragon Quest" in my mind for the story, happened three weeks before the Canterlot Wedding. The biggest change though is that Spike....looses his right eye to Garble (the red dragon) saving the egg.
That's when the "villan's" friend, Konan, stepped in while they were unconscious and Spike was in the hospital. He had the determination to do what was right, he could figure out how to use the Rin'negan's power properly.
The Powers granted by the eye:
mastery of fire spells
mastery of wind, lightning, water, and earth spells.
pulling objects-Bansho TEnnin
and THIS technique in the video
2244668 What does this have to do with the story? If you wanted to tell me all this my user-page is a much better place.
The Swagon of Ponyville strikes again. Nice one, man.
...Twilight... just... just... ah, I don't even know anymore...
I don't really have anything else to say, good as always.
2244810
Sorry about that. I'm not thinking too quickly these days.
Anyways, I was listening to music, and reading Spike's "inner dilemma" about how he was going to well, handle six mares, really brought some of the inner dilemma ideas about what is right and wrong in my future planned story to life and brought forward ideas and potential conflicts I hadn't thought of.
I actually am a huge fan of ALL of your stories-whether I get time to review or not tends to be seen, as this-for example-I had to leave immediately after my last review, so I couldn't go on about how I loved the fact you really brought out the characters and their personalities without going overboard. I can really learn from works like this.
Just...Thank You.
2246182 I aim to please
And we have come full circle
Spike the Dragon ladies and gentlemen. Celestia's gift to all mare-kind.
Now time for the agonising wait for an update.
Keep up the great work!
2243784
One of the top ten comments ever.
2248515 Woot!
Damn, when you come back with a update, you come back strong!
Hell of a amazing job as always Cloud.
Oh, and try not to hurt your editor too much, they still have many more stories to work on, which I am still very, very eager to read.
Almost forgot, I did notice that you didn't separate the POV's of the Mane 6 with a boarder when it came to each one describing there own sexually experience.
Just thought I should say that because it's not something I normally see happening I your stories.
2248861 I never use boarders or breaks; I don't believe in them.
2249463Hmmm.... Really?
2249620 Yep
2249715Just checked, don't know why I doubted you.
Well that does show how long it's been since we got a update from you. Think it's time I go read some of those stories again to catch up.
2244471>>2244563>>2245156>>2248304>>2243339
2243264 Good catch, but that's all you have to say?
2243268 Assimilation is imminent!
2243282
2243307 Pinkie would like you to know she sees seven shadows.
2249851 I know; I'm awesome
Battle plan!
2249890 Thanks, to Pinkie.
swandive into the greatest night of your life
2250292 Greatest night, so far
2249890 NOPE. Great update. Needed more sex tho. GAWD, i thout u wer good at this
you......... just got yourself a new follower, holy shit that was an awesome story
FUCK YEAH YOU MOTHER FUCKING SON OF A BITCH MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF AWESOME FUCKING SHIT!!! Do you wanna know what I say to this? Final attack ride: A-A-A-A-A-A-AWESOME!!! BUT ONCE AGAIN, FUCK YEAH YOU MOTHER FUCKING SON OF A BITCH MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF FUCKING AWESOME SHIT!!!
Twilight gave him the most seductive stare; it was super effective! Haha XD
I'm pretty sure I speak for most males that read this: I fucking wish I was in Spike's shoes right now.
spike dude you are a boss 'nough said
also this chapter gave me a nose bleed from the heat
Holy fucking shit. Spike is a boss
Weirdezt boner ever lool.Damn i taught him well Spike ya made your dad proud“sniffle,sniffle,sob,sob”