1044431 I actually fixed that about 7 minutes ago, when I noticed it. Didn't do anything for those of you reading at that moment, though. By the way, I think Zecora being skilled in aphrodisiac cooking was a nice touch. Almost made me forgive you for doing Rarity and Big Mac for the wedding prompt, almost.
Wolderfull chapter. No wonder why it took you so long. Please, please, please, PLEASE!! Do not make Pinkie Pie a fucking psycho sex machine! Every fucking clop fic in existance has already done that, and it's stupid and boring. Come on man, you can do better than that
I just finished rereading the first chapter when you updated. Really good stuff, but I can see a bit of what you're foreshadowing, and I'm curious of how it'll play out.
1044445 Heh, thanks. To be honest, on the day of the Rarity prompt, I had completely forgotten about the tumblr post, and I only remembered with about an hour and a half left before submissions were closed. So I quickly said to myself, "Who's Rarity married to?" Even though my headcanon puts her with Spike, I decided to try something different, and the first stallion I came up with was Big Mac, so I went with that. Seemed to turn out okay.
DONE READING. that was awesome, i personally cannot wait for the pinkie, twilight and spike super sexy fun time three way! though i have a feeling that somepony is going to get greedy and try and take the stud drake for theirselves.
my personal guess, its going to be miss cheerile.
again, fantastic chapter!
also, there is an italic error, around two thirds of the fic, dont know if this has been pointed out yet
1044524 A least your headcannon is right. I did that with the thirty minute prompt Sunday. Fucking internet was wonky all day and it was the first time I could get on Tumblr to find one of the most amazing prompts and almost no time to think it through and write it.
1044536 Wrong! Well, kind of. Anyways, I actually had that fixed about 5 mins after it was up, but, as you were already reading it, it didn't change for you.
All of my yes! A shower sex scene in this story is just perfect! Definitely looking forward to Pinkie and Twilight getting in on this. I wonder if Twilight is going to be brazen enough to do this and if Pinkie is going to get a little kinky. Hope the next chapter doesn't take as long.
1053651 A decent number, skipped one or two of the jokes as I felt they were funny, but not really helpful. Uped the detail on the pain and awkwardness of positions. All grammar related ones, thank you. Clarified some things that seems to have confused you. The suggestions I agreed with basically.
1169202 She used smaller apples, so she didn't break it. There's enough space between the entrance and the hymen that you can get a finger or smaller toy inside without breaking it. I was wondering if anyone would point that out though, as I had considered that issue myself. I applaud you for you observational skills!
.... Thumbs up, faving, and following your works with glee. You sir are a genius. Hell, you managed to convert me from a die-hard 'No Sparity' to 'Needs Moar Sparity.'
Sorry this took so long. I suspect, you will find it worth the wait, though.
As FlimFlamBros. once said,
"Aww, everything is absoulutlly perfect..... which means something terrible is just around the corner."
Hopefully, some of you caught on to the foreshadowing. If you were really attentive, you might even know what is going to happen.
I loved this chapter, but I'm really going to enjoy the next one. The events, plus Pinkie Pie's antics, are really going to be fun to write.
holy fuck, this actually updated!?!?!?
screw porn, I'm reading ponies!
bout time I get quoted! I've quoted almost everyone who has given me a quote, it feels nice to be on the receiving end.
Now to read!!
1044242 I was wondering how somebody already finished the eleven thousand ninety-nine word chapter.
thank you for updating, this story kicks ass. Spike the player for the win.
1044350 Happy to oblige.
Other than the HTML slip-up towards the end (with the italics), I enjoyed this update very much. + + = win.
1044431 I actually fixed that about 7 minutes ago, when I noticed it. Didn't do anything for those of you reading at that moment, though. By the way, I think Zecora being skilled in aphrodisiac cooking was a nice touch. Almost made me forgive you for doing Rarity and Big Mac for the wedding prompt, almost.
1044277 You sir deserve a medal. SOMEBODY GET THIS MAN A MEDAL
So next is Pinkie and Twilight. Why do I get the feeling that Twilight will resist some? And be hardheaded? Oh well.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png + + = Awesome
Made my evening.
Wolderfull chapter. No wonder why it took you so long.
Please, please, please, PLEASE!! Do not make Pinkie Pie a fucking psycho sex machine! Every fucking clop fic in existance has already done that, and it's stupid and boring. Come on man, you can do better than that
662638AND THUS THE BASTARD TOOK 10 WEEKS,SEE WHAT YOU DID?!
I just finished rereading the first chapter when you updated. Really good stuff, but I can see a bit of what you're foreshadowing, and I'm curious of how it'll play out.
1044445 Heh, thanks. To be honest, on the day of the Rarity prompt, I had completely forgotten about the tumblr post, and I only remembered with about an hour and a half left before submissions were closed. So I quickly said to myself, "Who's Rarity married to?" Even though my headcanon puts her with Spike, I decided to try something different, and the first stallion I came up with was Big Mac, so I went with that. Seemed to turn out okay.
DONE READING.
that was awesome, i personally cannot wait for the pinkie, twilight and spike super sexy fun time three way! though i have a feeling that somepony is going to get greedy and try and take the stud drake for theirselves.
my personal guess, its going to be miss cheerile.
again, fantastic chapter!
also, there is an italic error, around two thirds of the fic, dont know if this has been pointed out yet
ALL RIGHT THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT GET SOME.
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1044242 I know right now if only he would also update Spikes weekend this day would be just perfect.
Doth my eyes deceive me? An update?
Its alive. Had to do it. So nice chapter by the way cant wait for the huge orgy that we all know is coming.
YES YES!!!
1044624 Spike better step up his training if he wants to have enough stamina live through that.
1044469 Because you paid attention.
1044524 A least your headcannon is right. I did that with the thirty minute prompt Sunday. Fucking internet was wonky all day and it was the first time I could get on Tumblr to find one of the most amazing prompts and almost no time to think it through and write it.
1044536 Wrong! Well, kind of. Anyways, I actually had that fixed about 5 mins after it was up, but, as you were already reading it, it didn't change for you.
1044660 Paintballs incoming!
1044952 Indeed, but at least he remained conscious this time.
All of my yes! A shower sex scene in this story is just perfect! Definitely looking forward to Pinkie and Twilight getting in on this. I wonder if Twilight is going to be brazen enough to do this and if Pinkie is going to get a little kinky. Hope the next chapter doesn't take as long.
A this plus a tinge of voyeurism from that necklace that Rainbow was wearing.
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1045717 *Clap* Points to you. I heavily doubted anyone would figure that part out. In fact, it's the leading in for the next chapter.
Fucking finally! It's here! Guess I'll call off Demise.
Excellent work. It really seems like you got the characters dead on! Can't wait for chapter 3!
1045803
I did, but I played Wind Waker. I know to distrust gift necklaces.
I come home to find this
I thank you kind sir for making my day
Doth mine eyes decieveth me? A new chapter?
HAPPY DAY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E-MINfVtYik
updates and i liked it!!
I almost forgot i had this story finally a update!
1049479 You did know about it You were waiting for the revisions last I remember and those were done a few days ago
Man, I don't know if I can really enjoy this one as much as I wish I could. Seeing it in its unfinished state will do that to you.
1053401 True. But that's why I write stuff I refuse to let either of you edit or proofread.
1053440
How many of my suggestions did you go with?
1053651 A decent number, skipped one or two of the jokes as I felt they were funny, but not really helpful. Uped the detail on the pain and awkwardness of positions. All grammar related ones, thank you. Clarified some things that seems to have confused you. The suggestions I agreed with basically.
STORY. Y U NO IN FAVOURITES YET!?!??
1053705 My question exactly.
1053726 I thought for SURE I had it. Hell, the first chapter has been read by me already. Ah, well, it's resolved now.
EDIT: I just replied to myself. Of course.
I feel... happy that I could contribute to this.
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1060300 Here, have an ice pack.
1169202 She used smaller apples, so she didn't break it. There's enough space between the entrance and the hymen that you can get a finger or smaller toy inside without breaking it. I was wondering if anyone would point that out though, as I had considered that issue myself. I applaud you for you observational skills!
1169272
*bows*
Wonderful chapter two, and I'm really curious what Rarity is planning with the necklace. If Pinkie is next, she probably let her listen or watch
Also, I wonder how Twilight is going to react. She looked a little hurt when Spike appreciated spending time with AJ and Rarity instead of her.
1173131 Ya know what I love, people who pay attention. People who notice the foreshadowing. Someone give this man a fucking cookie!
1174666
Oooh, I love cookies.
1044277Cant wait for the next one
Well haven't read it yet but knowing you it must be awesome.
Somehow I can tell this story will end with Spike involved in an orgy with all six of them.
Please continue with this soon!
.... Thumbs up, faving, and following your works with glee. You sir are a genius. Hell, you managed to convert me from a die-hard 'No Sparity' to 'Needs Moar Sparity.'