Trixie Lulamoon investigates the mysterious and gruesome death of her grandfather Star Tome Lulamoon and in doing so learns just how deep the shadows in Equestria can be. Now dealing with things she can barely understand and with her mind fraying at the seems. She needs to put together the clues left by her late grandfather and pit her wills against an ancient evil.
This story is a crossover between My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and Eternal Darkness: Sanity's Requiem
Thanks to my friend http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Phoenix+Avalon who helped this be readable.
And also big thanks to TorturedArtist745 and his list on the Eternal Darkness magic http://torturedartist745.deviantart.com/art/Complete-Guide-to-Eternal-Darkness-Runes-281864941
Chapters (6)
Great show + great game = EPIC CROSSOVER WIN!
5805317 Thank you! Glad I was able to do the two inspirations justice.
I just want to say that whatever editing I did was super minor, and the gist of the story and the characters made the task so enjoyable!
As a finished product it has great movement and the tone makes it so vivid and exciting. 
The last battle scene reads like something out of a movie. Excellent work my friend! 
Story based on a very interesting game, with my favorite pony as the (main) protagonist? I approve, of course.
On the downside, your writing needs a lot of work. Not many typos I could spot, but the constant run-on sentences get distracting. Also, the mechanical "game action" adaptation of the scenes took away from the feeling of horror. I won't sugarcoat it - you need practice. Fortunately, writing is practice, keep it up and try your best.
I'll follow this for the time being.
6287446 Yeah run-ons are my weakness and it is hard at least for me to blend video game and and written set pieces. So thank you for the criticism and Aye Writing is always practice till ya die or lose your hands in a freak juggling accident.