This story is a sequel to Shaping our Dreams
Cloudchaser and Flitter made it work, they fought against the odds for each other, and the love they share.
However, there is worse to come as echoes from the past return to haunt their future.
How far will they go to try and save their love?
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Rated Teen for non-clop incest, but passionate moments included!
Attention! It is necessary to read ALL prequels in order to get this story! If you didn't read the prequels please don't bother reading this and giving an unneeded downvote.
Help provided by Twidashforever
Story edited by VitalSpark
Coverart by the awesome aeroytechyon-x
Chapters (10)
Great story. But as for the name...im not sure. Dont get me wrong, its a great name for a story, but when you say it out loud, i dont know...it sounds weird. Might I suggest you rename it "Beyond Sisterly Love"
As an editor I just think it sounds better that way, but as the authoe you do know better on the story, so in the end it is your choice and decision on what to name it.
Either way, you're off to a great start! I loved every moment as well as all the prequels. Keep up the great work
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I can't exactly name why.
Sometimes I write a story and do the title later, pondering days about it.
But glad you like the story
5831858 oh i loved it and cannot wait for more chapters
Once again...great job! I was enthralled the wnole time. I cannot wait till the next chapter is out
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Heh thanks.
Chapter three will follow this week.
Chapter four... well, I hope to have it ready by next week, but can't promise that since I have to work.
5836285 lol im sure everyone understands that you have a life outside this, so update when you can, its fine
If I were to meet Cerulean, well...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_-L_lH9gpDQ
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lol
Bravo!, BRAVO!, I Do Say! I Patiently Await An Update! Now If You Excuse Me, I Have GOT To Tell Mythwalker About This!
Have An Adorable Flitter!, You've Earned It!
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~ShadowLove
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Glad you like it and thanks
Just Got Done Reading The Two Chapters Of Your Story, And I Have To Say That This Is Amazing, This Is One Of My Favorite Ships, So This Instantly Put A Smile On My Face! I Will Most Definitely Be Reading The Next Chapter As Soon As You Put It Up :3 But Something Tells Me Shadow Might Beat Me To The Punch -_-
Anyways Great Story!, Keep It Up, Your Doing Fantastic! :3
~Mythwalker
I really love the shower scene in this chapter.
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Thanks and I will
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Love that one too
The formatting seems to be slightly off on the tabbing. You might want to take a look when you get a chance. (Seems to be true for all chapters)
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That's an error how my laptop shows it also on google docs.
Can't fix it.
Dayuuummm... Things are totally not looking up.
Their situation is getting progressively better and worse at the same time! I don't know what to expect, but whatever the outcome is, I'll be pleased to see and accept it. You've made a great narration up till this point and I hope we can read more soon!
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Thanks, I hope what comes up will surprise everypony.
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You mean the bit with the singing, tap-dancing judge?
This is now one of my all time favorite fics! I've never read or had interest in this ship, but there was just something special that made me take a look at this one, and I'm so glad I did! Thank you for all the chapters of great writing you've given us!
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I'm glad you like it that far.
Chapter five is on it's way and we're not done yet.
As expected, another great chapter. Keep up the great work
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Thanks
This one took a bit more time but its also longer
Well, Swift Justice should also be a detective. He found out about the arrangement to say the least...
As for the plot twist of White Lightning and Celestia... I don't know, I think It would've been more interesting to see a mother's true reaction at this.
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Ah you would wonder how many siblings are sharing a relationship and their parents are okay with it.
Besides, the story isn't over yet.
We covered their mother, but not their father yet^^
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Oh... That sounds interesting...
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Don't worry, we still have five chapters to go
What does that author's note mean? huh?
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Wait for the next chapter
Meanwhile in Ponyville: Spits and Dash are doing things... Fun things...
Rainbow: "Got any threes?"
Spits: "Go Fish."
XP
Knowing Scratch, I can imagine this being a common thing in her home...
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I'm not going to say it's true.
I'm not going to deny it either.
Do what ya want with your sick fantasy
6054899 Did... Did Scratch just give me perission to come up with sick fantasies about her? ...I don't know how to process this information... Probably best to forget it exists, lest Tavi murder me slowly... XD
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I never gave permission for anything.
Just told ya to do what ya want with ur sick fantasy
Holy poopsacks this is awesome
This is getting emotional
It's goin down fer real
Really good job
You just can't let them have a full day of peace can you? XD
This chapter was funny. I like how Wave and Lightning have sorted out their problems. Things seem to be looking up for Flitter and Cloud.
The most interesting thing in this story is to see how much your writing has improved since your first Cloudchaser/Flitter story.
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Glad you like it
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Thanks! It was a long way xD
When I was reading the early parts of this chapter, I remembered TiM: Preening is a family affair and feared you were going to go full-on family orgy. I'm glad you didn't.
Whoo! This was an awesome story.
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Just a bit sexy fun
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Thanks!
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Maybe?
But definitely not in the next time, I'm afraid.
6071856 — Apparently not. ScrathnTavi can't just let them have a single day without something going wrong or them having something bad happen. But this story is great. Love it so like and fav.
I'm just now realising that this is basically an origins story.