This story is a sequel to Hearth's Warming Cloudshaping
After breaking her own limitations for her sister, Flitter finally got what she wanted.
But just at the beautiful moment of sharing love, her mind gets stricken by fear and self-doubts.
Rethinking her actions, she runs away from her sister, trying to make the right decision.
Is there any chance for this young, forbidden love to survive?
Follow the story of Flitter and Cloudchaser from Hearth's Warming Eve to New Year's Eve.
My small fic for New Year's Eve and promised sequel to Hearth's Warming Cloudshaping
No clop, just some situations (like incest) that require 'teen' and 'Sex' markers 
Chapters (1)
I wouldn't worry about people not liking the topic, your view/like ratio is pretty good. Anyway, nice job. There were some places where the grammar could use some work, and it felt a little rushed over all, but I liked it. Happy new years/new years eve!
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Heh thanks
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Theres one reason that it feels rushed at some points: I got many more Ideas but due to my plans for a multichaptered sequel I had to leave some things blank. (Because I mostly had no Idea what to fit in sry
Anyways glad you like it
As Rage mentioned, a bit rough around the edges and rushed.
But I still love it, great sequel.
And don't mind about somepony disliking the topic, continue your work!
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Thanks Spits
Rainbow sounded more like the author/narrator than her actual character.
I'll reserve further judgment until later.
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Why is everypony deep into main ponysona of characters??
Everypony can show feelings and Rainbow Dash is no excuse as you can see several times in the show
It might be rare at her ponysona but in the end she's representing her element
No full stop equals robot speech
I won't lie... the My love bit is throwing me off a great deal, and its ultra cheesy.
BUT! I love this one shot, it was sweet, and I liked it, specially that part with Dashie
(Sorry if I'm harsh.)
I only read roughly a tenth of the story to get a feel of it all, and I was noticing minor errors both left and right. While some don't mind, I have OCD when it comes to grammar, punctuation, and et cetera. The vibe was good, but could've been better; I would've suggested some more detailing on the whole "romance", to give it a feeling of trueness and more believability.
While I'm certainly a fan, and will finish this soon, it's not very easy with the numerous mistakes.
My Rating: B-
Punctuation: C
Detailing: B+
Storyline: A-
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This series was one of the first I ever made. Of course there are a lot of errors in it.
I had no editor and my english was... well, let's say kind of lacking.
Since I don't have time reworking this it just stands as it was.
Work of a mare trying her hooves in english writing.
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If you'd like, I could help with editing when I get my computer back (sorta grounded ^^'). I would be happy to help!
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I already have editors for all my new stories.
There is just no time for me to rework this here.
If you want to edit this give me a call and I send you the google docs link
Another spectacular story, another upvote and another fave.