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flyingtigers40


Hi, I am not a brony, but love good stories and this site has yielded many good works, also I'm a person who likes villains and thinks spike needs a bigger role in show than he has now.

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Your grammar needs work. Other than that, I kind of see where you're going with this.

Missed a couple of spaces here and there, but I like it overall.

Your grammar is terrible! No offense to you or anything. The idea is absolutely terrific! A little tip put spaces after sentences and always make singular "i" capital for example. See this small space after my sentences? You must always do that after a sentence! I for one do believe it is important. So yes indeed I do think it is very important!

5852497 The Story is under new management.

5852155 The Story is under new management.

5852085 The Story is under new management.

just gonna say this now, you have to reply on the same chapter as the original comment or it won't notify anyone.
why? because... uh... reasons.

You have used an image from Dragon's Dogma, as such, I thought this was a Dragon's Dogma crossover. If it isn't too much trouble, please change the picture to something more accurate, so nobody else falls into the same confusion, goodbye.

6858411 I just liked the picture. But whatever. Mah bad.:scootangel:

a flying turtle that can also walk fast

tortoises can actually haul ass if needed, they just like to kinda waddle around mostly.

7379609 Yeah, see I didn't know that. Turtles really aren't my favorite animal.

But, the more you know.:twistnerd:

well if you need help with the monster hunter verse I can help as I have am a big fan of it

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