Hi, I am not a brony, but love good stories and this site has yielded many good works, also I'm a person who likes villains and thinks spike needs a bigger role in show than he has now.
Three knights, long forgotten to the sands of time, ended the Great War and would usher an age of prosperity. Short would this age be as insurgents within the government rose causing the Collapse. Would they return to their land as servants or lords?
A meteor impacts the nation of Equestria, Planet Equis. Tranquility is quickly snuffed out when a poison begins to spread violently. The Princesses cannot combat this unknown threat, as no knowledge of it exists. Help comes from an unexpected source.
Fluttershy loves animals and she's quite adept at taking care of even dangerous ones. But can she take care of one of the deadliest predators ever known?
A young man decides to attend a convention with his friends dressed as his favorite character from the Fire Emblem series. Next thing he knows he's in Equestria.
Your grammar is terrible! No offense to you or anything. The idea is absolutely terrific! A little tip put spaces after sentences and always make singular "i" capital for example. See this small space after my sentences? You must always do that after a sentence! I for one do believe it is important. So yes indeed I do think it is very important!
You have used an image from Dragon's Dogma, as such, I thought this was a Dragon's Dogma crossover. If it isn't too much trouble, please change the picture to something more accurate, so nobody else falls into the same confusion, goodbye.
Your grammar needs work. Other than that, I kind of see where you're going with this.
5852085 any suggestions?
Missed a couple of spaces here and there, but I like it overall.
Your grammar is terrible! No offense to you or anything. The idea is absolutely terrific! A little tip put spaces after sentences and always make singular "i" capital for example. See this small space after my sentences? You must always do that after a sentence! I for one do believe it is important. So yes indeed I do think it is very important!
5852497 The Story is under new management.
5852155 The Story is under new management.
5852085 The Story is under new management.
just gonna say this now, you have to reply on the same chapter as the original comment or it won't notify anyone.
why? because... uh... reasons.
You have used an image from Dragon's Dogma, as such, I thought this was a Dragon's Dogma crossover. If it isn't too much trouble, please change the picture to something more accurate, so nobody else falls into the same confusion, goodbye.
6858411 I just liked the picture. But whatever. Mah bad.
tortoises can actually haul ass if needed, they just like to kinda waddle around mostly.
7379609 Yeah, see I didn't know that. Turtles really aren't my favorite animal.
But, the more you know.
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well if you need help with the monster hunter verse I can help as I have am a big fan of it