Ryan is a normal twelve-year old boy. Miranda is a normal eleven-year old girl. They both fall under the standards of normal, but as of recently, they are far from normal.
One day, Miranda disappears from the face of the Earth, leaving Ryan distraught with his best friend Justin to cheer him up. But, everything changes when Ryan disappears as well, sucked into the world of Equestria by watching the first episode again.
Now in Equestria - as a pegasus pony, no less - Ryan must find a way to get back home as a human. But what happens if he happens to meet a pony who is just like Miranda in Ponyville?
Chapters (3)
it was Cliche but fairly well written, keep it up I wouldn't mind to see more of your writing.
"...like a certain beaver’s hairstyle..."
No way this character's twelve. Way to go dating yourself right out of the gate, you twenty-plus, you.
Also, the perspective shift at the end was a little jarring, and your pacing is strange.
Wait, interdimensional travel is commonplace there. I thought it was just Pinkie. I never knew that the rest of the mane 6 could pull it off
what is this madness.
Madness? THIS IS EQUESTRIA!!!!!!