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New York of the year 2099. Things have changed, but some things never change. Miguel O'Hara the SpiderMan of this future is stranded by his former boss Tyler Stone in a place unknown to him, looking for a way back to the future will be hard on the hero but he will return before Tyler Stone makes any stupid mistakes in trying to make Alchemax exist before it was originaly made.
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Great beginning for a story, but you need an editor as there are some grammar mistakes.
Ya still looking for a experienced editor and I love writing Spidey stories its my thing
5783274 Did you help out with the spiders and magic stories?
No I'm just a SpiderMan nerd
No I just love SpiderMan I know almost everything about him and his story. Even brand new day
Great story,one thing that bugs me though is how big the break images are I think it would be better if you made them smaller
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Alright I'll make sure to change the break images
yeesh, luna and celestia seemed rather.... whats the word? COMPLETELY BATSHIT INSANE!?!?!?!?!?! they were freaking out over one human! luna nearly broke his back for crying out loud!!! now i'm sensing a batman related joke incoming, but its lost on me...
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Ya Luna and Celestia don't like SpiderMan
Good Lord whats their problem
? Also "IS they going to be ok", I think you meant ARE, and could you find different break images for the prologue, the ones you have are WAY to big.
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Ya I gonna edit on days I'm not writing
5787837 I noticed
Sorry to ask but is this the SpiderMan 2099 from shattered dimensions?
5799746 Only asking, because I thought 2099 didn't have spider sense in the comic?
whatever I like the story to much can't wait for more.
Whoop whoop! My OC is here!
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Well Dragons Den your O.C is the main villain along with some 2099 super villains as well.
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YUS!!!
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I told you main villain!
wow, there was a lot of hitting involving the face in this chapter
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lol
well, that escalated quickly
5837680 do a crossover with the ultimate Spider-Man miles Morales that would be awesome!
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Sure why not I think 2099 has had its run. Its time for a new Spidey right?
6047569 Yeah I agree
You know I'm not really complaining about the story, but has anyone noticed how the sisters always think the human is evil cliche in most of the hie stories or marvel crossovers.
"take that monster back to your house"
No no I must have misread that, Celestia would never be that stupid.
"take that monster back to your house"
Monster? MONSTER!? YOU ATTACKED HIM FIRST YOU ASSHOLE!!!!!!!! PLUS HE SAVED TWILIGHT'S FRIENDS AND THAT FILLY!!!! CELESTIA AND LUNA, I HEREBY DECLARE YOU: THE DUMBEST AND MOST IDIOTIC BEINGS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!
And more examples of the Princess's stupidity
"Shock I never noticed how beautiful Rainbow is"
Where did that come from?
"SpiderMan grabbed SpiderMan's chest"
This......was not good. It started out great in the beginning of the first chapter! But then it took a giant nose dive. What with everyone acting like idiots, the forced romance, the generic villain, it's all just crap. I give this a 4/10.
As much as I liked the story reading it the first time, looking back my OC (Helvzog) was put in a OP position... And now I got a bunch of people calling Gary Stu/Mary Sue, and good god that forced romance....
I rate 3/10
This story was just... [Silver Chord shivers.]I'm sorry, but this sucked. Just... Flat-out, it sucked. I mean... Wow...
Is the Fragment a reference to the game Spider-Man : Shattered Dimensions?
Okay I like this, but a few complaints.
One, while Miguel O'Hara has enhanced sight and hearing he does not have a "Spider Sense".
Two, (although this is a minor issue) when Miguel is transported to the MLP verse he automatically knows it is another universe, couldn't he of also considered time travel?
And three he refers to Peter Parker's timeline as if it is another universe entirely. Miguel is from the same timeline just the future of it.
But despite that, I liked the first chapter overall.
I'll continue reading, but Miguel having "Spider-Sense" is going to bug me.
Wtf is their problem? Didn't they JUST see him rescue someone. Of course attacking him out of nowhere is gonna cause him to self defend himself!
"Monster"? Fuck off Celestia, you and your little posse started it!
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Well maybe the ponies wiped the humans out and the princesses were fed propaganda about how humans are inherently evil.
Still does not make beating up a saviour okay.