A war story

by Col_R4inbow_D4sh

Chapter 6.5 [Meanwhile by Soarin and Rainbow Dash]

Chapter 6.5

Time: The retreat from the attack.

"Okay Commander, Spitfire, Fleetfoot, you fallback first," Rainbow ordered,

I gave them 5 minutes until I sended Big Mac and 2 minutes after him Twilight. I already lost several platoons and finally gave order to retreat.

"Okay, Everypony we are falling back now," Rainbow ordered

We tried to fallback as fast as we could, but I knew the russians would follow us.

"Driver, we have make it look like we got tracked, and as soon as the rest of the platoon are out of sight, we are going to distract the russians," Rainbow said

"Yes Ma'am," The Driver replied

The driver was very good it looked perfect... and even felt perfect.

"Attention, Commander tank tracked!" A Pony exclaimed

"You guys keep going, But I want you to tell Big Mac 2 things, First: Gray Ghost and Second: Redemption, but it has several meaning," Rainbow said

"Yes. Ma'am," A Pony answered

The platoons began to drive again, and as soon as they where out of sight.

"Okay, they are out now, Let's go!" Rainbow exclaimed

We tried to distract them and it worked for a couple of minutes, The Driver learned much, He Dodged the tank shells even with style, The Gunner hitted nearly every shot, Soarin gave perfect commander order, And I gave very good artillery coordinates. But even the best tank team ever can't hold this up forever, For 1 second no attention was given and and Bam! Engine knocked out, We got out of the tank, But the russians already had us surrounded. And we surrendered, The russians brought us to a small prison camp, in a small village 7 or 8 miles away fom here. As we arrived there they threw us into a cell.

"And now?" Soarin asked

"Now?, We are going to wait it's only a question of time, Until Big Mac gets it," Rainbow answered

"Hmm, well your right," Soarin replied

We waited there doing nothing.

The Next day

It was something arround noon. Soarin and I woke up to a cell door opening, A Griffin signed Soarin to come with them, Soarin stood up and began to walk to them, I walked infront of him.

"Either me or none of us," Rainbow said

"Dash, it's okay just," Before Soarin could finish Rainbow shot him a glare,

"If you insist," One of the Griffins said

I walked over to them, and they closed the cell door, and began to make their way. We arrived in a small room and they handcuffed me to a chair. Another griffin walked in. He looked at me and began to ask questions.

"What are you plans?" The Griffin asked

"...," No reply

"I ask again, What are your plans?" The Griffin asked again

"...," Still no reply

"Okay, that's it," The Griffin said

Before I knew it a pretty nasty punshed hit me against the snout. My snout began to bleed and I tasted blood in my mouth too.

"Now tell me!" The griffin demanded

Rainbows reaction: She spitted blood on the ground and nothing more,

"Ohh, So you are a hard one, eh?" The griffin asked

"...," No reply

"Well if it's like this," The griffin said

For every question he asked for every no reply I gave I got 3 punches. This lastet for about 10 till 20 minutes I had a black eye, bruises everywhere and I think at the end there I heared some ribs cracking, and I guarantee I got a concussion...again. But finally.

"Okay, That's enough bring her back into the cell! And get that other pony in here!" The Griffin ordered

"Dare to touch him, and I kill you," Was my first reply to him till now

"Ohh, so you do can speak," The griffin replied

"Yea, and I say again touch him and your dead," I answered

"Well, you ell me about your plans and I won't touch him," The griffin replied

"*Sigh*, Okay, This operation i have is called: Rolling Thunder. We are supposed to attack the chinese force push them back and claim china to end this damn war," I answered

"was that so hard?" The griffin asked

"Get her back into the cell!" The griffin demanded

They carried me back to the cell, and threw me in again.

"Dash!" Soarin exclaimed

"Dad?" I asked

"What? No, it's me Soarin!" He replied worried

"i knew that *Chuckle*," I replied before I blacked out.

Time: Future

I woke up to explosion and Shooting, The next thing I know is that a Squad off very familiar Ponies open the cell door and carried me out.

Comments

[Amethyst Blade]

Russian offensive...What's with media nowadays in the "Western" and Russian? Before, it was German, now it's Russian...
And I'm not exactly fond of "'Murica fuck yeah" (A few jokes here and there is acceptable). 'Murica is hardly an utopia...or the good guy...(because of the goverment, really)...I haven't read the story...This is just my opinion on the things to avoid...The world as it is right now is hardly at peace. Political shitstorms are everywhere...Try to avoid going in too deep, it could kill the story before it even begin...
Also, from what I gathered, you need some sort of editor...

[Col_R4inbow_D4sh]

5830247 Dude before you give your opinions read the stories or at least the description, This story is from a GAME, I know the world ain't in peace and I'll be honest, I don't care cause world never was in peace.

[Amethyst Blade]

5830531 True...and my tone is definitely not insulting so if ya wondering, no, I am not pointing fingers....
Just a bit of my opinion...also, from what i had gleamed, this is not a story for me.

[Dusk_Writer]

Wow did dash just tell the plan…or is it a fake one hmm