Well, now i know a lot of you are going to be dissapointed..... but this is it. the end of our tale, and an ending i've been planning since the start. I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as i did writing it, and who knows? there might be a sequel for this. we'll see.
“Daddy?”
“Yes my son?”
“What does any of that have to do with how you met mommy?” asked the young colt. He had been curious as to just how his parents met, and asked his father. What he had received was a tale of romance, adventure, and mistakes made. His father laughed.
“Well, I think I’ll let you figure that one out on your own.” said his father, getting up and trotting towards the kitchen. “So darling, what’s for dinner today?”
“fruit salad. Ya know, ah don’t think he’s quite ready fer that story. He’s only six.” said the colts mother. Every time the colt had asked her for the story, she had told him no. but this time, she had told him to ask his father, so he did.
“Well, it’s usually best to sate curiosity early, that way it does not grow into something else.” said the father, using his magic to steal a piece of fruit from the bowl and pop it into his mouth.
“Ya know, that excuse don’t really work in this situation.” she said, hoofing him in the shoulder. “That’s fer takin’ mah fruit.”
“Ow! well, no matter. I told him the story…. All that remains is to see if he can figure it out….” said the father, rearing up and stretching out before planting his hooves on the ground again. And that’s when the waiting ended.
“Papa! You’re the druid!” said the colt, running into the kitchen, an excited look on his face.
“Oh, an’ ah get no recognition? Thanks a lot fer tellin’ both ends’a the story there, Fang.” said the child’s mother, hoofing her husband in the shoulder again.
“Hey! That’s my bad shoulder there! Yes, my son, I was the druid. That burst of light? It made me into a pony. And that’s why you’re a unicorn, just like me.” he said, ruffling his sons mane. “and that’s why the farm has been so productive lately to. And I get no love for it at all.” he said sarcastically.
“No love, eh? That’s not what ya said last night.” said his wife jokingly.
“Please, darling, not around Apple Fang. He’s far to young for that kind of talk.” said the colt’s father very seriously. “Anyway, my son, it will be a while before dinner is done, so why don’t you go finish your schoolwork? I would hate to have my ramblings get you a failing grade.” he said to his child, who then nodded and went off to his room. He sighed contentedly and looked around his home. It was nothing fancy, but it was home. And that was all he needed. He turned to go outside and help his brother in law bring in the harvest, and took a look at his flank. No matter how many times he saw it, his cutie mark always amazed him.
A single fang, inside a heart shaped Apple.
Not a bad ending but the last couple of chapters felt a tad bit rushed. Looking forward to more work from you
a song for the end
FOOLY COOLY !
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"Ride on Shooting Star",.
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Slide of an orange reflects in the sky
Hanging the pride of a sponge
Spider
No need to hide
the premonition of life captured
it is like a colored dream
Ride on shooting star
I continued singing
like a shotgun with all my heart
A grunged hamster becomes more mature
and is accompanied by a lobster of revenge
Sniper
What do you say that
you can see in that framed world?
I want to touch it before you aim
Ride on shooting star
I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms
I lied to you
Ride on shooting star
I continued singing
like a shotgun with all my heart
You should probably change your story status to complete unless your gonna add some final chapter or something
It's been a hell of a ride but now it's time to take this story outback and put her down.
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I rather liked this ending
That was...an unexpectedly pleasant ending. Well done.
Nice ending, I figured there might've been another chapter or two but I'm happy with this ending .
And here I was expecting some epic battle with everfree's darkness. A well, good ending none the less.
I liked the story overall
(been woundering though, was Fang from the elder scrolls universe? he did mention skooma...)
I thought that naming their son apple fang was a little wierd, whatever.
72418 1. no, i just couldn't think of an original name for a drug.... i'm not very creative when it comes to names.
2. same as number 1, but with a kid. call me not very creative.
...when do you want your arrows now or later?
man this needs a better ending it didn't even tell if Wolves fang died or not
73961 uuummmmmmmm.......... did you read the same last chapter i did? cuz i'm pretty sure it does say whether or not he died. it may be kinda subtle, but i tried to make sure most people would be able to pick it out.
A fitting ending, well done.
Interesting... Not what I exPected but good nonetheless