Fluttershy is getting old and reminisces on her past.
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Instant dislike? Already?
I take it that the trolls are on the prowl...
well, I'm going to go cry my eyes out now
great story though
So many feels, so little places to hold them all...
This was really well-written. The last scene was probably the one that hit me the most; well spoken, lots of emotion, and it left no loose ends. I'm very satisfied. Keep up the good work.
The Last In Line - Dio
RIP Ronnie James Dio, 7/10/42 - 5/16/10
I love the cover pic!
I'll have to read this later. Figures I find this right before I need to leave for work. But I will definitely have to check this out!
This was beautiful
I love learning from the elderly and the vast experiences they have. You gave us a wonderful idea of what that might be like if we could learn from fluttershy. 
Wonderful story, new fav
Amazing man. Just amazing.
I adored this. Good job c: !
I cancelled an entire book because there were just too many well-written ending stories to lives of ponies.
I believe that was the right choice.
Good job on this.
note to self : this story + listening to beautiful music in the background = not a good combination at work
but hnnnng my heart and feels and everything, that was so beautiful. I've noticed only one little typo :
"She remembered hearing of her newlywed grandfillys leap into motherhood and she remembered asking to see her great-grandcolt." - grandfillys should be grandfilly's.
That was the only thing I noticed though, apart from that it was wonderful.
Even more so due to the fact of when you wrote it - wishing I possessed your talent
Definite like and favorite on this one, keep 'em coming! I'm watching you
I shouldn't have had mellow music from Xenogears playing while I read this. I nearly cried. Thankfully I had my Fluttershy figure nearby to hug during the really sad moments.
All in all it was beautiful! Have a vote up and a fav! And I love the cover pic!
>> Talaan
forever!
Why Can't I hold all these pieces of my heart?
That was amazingly well written. =']
***EDIT NOTICE:
-Added detail to certain parts and smoothed transition.
-Main purpose of this edit was to increase the length by ~500 words.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cTlARe1EPgE
This pony made my day. :')
Seeing that my work was appreciated means more then many ponies might realize. Expect more from me now- I stopped writing because I didn't think anypony really cared much for my work, I realize that maybe I was wrong now. :)
Right in the feels!
Nice job!
This was an amazingly feel-tastic story!
Keep up the good work!
I loved it!
Manly tears were shed