Okay then *back away slowly* favorites story

A little strong like black coffee thrown in the face, scolding hot.

5715354 Same here.
Approach with caution.

Good attempt, but a few typos and mispellings, but still a good attempt. And hot, very hot.

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Sorry if I went a bit hard on my first fanfic.

5716287 Meh I still liked it good work

Wow...this is kinda amazing. If this get's turned into a whole story I know it's going to be excellent.

This was a good story! One thing I would recommend would be to re-read and fix some of the spelling mistakes. I know that for me personally, it detracted from the enjoyment. Overall, very good!

Hehehe cool story man

Applejack happily welcomed this new change in her lover. With her previous relationship she had always been the dominant one, it even scared a few of her previous boyfriends away. But now she saw things at the opposite end of the spectrum, she loved it! After her and Spike's awkward previous sexual encounters she finally got to see his dominant side. And she loved it! He was beast, finally giving into his most carnal desires, his primal instincts were finally released and all focused on one thing. Fucking the girl in front of her witless.

I would more think she would be concerned for her coltfriend. Only when she would be sure this isn't dangerous would she think these things.

I would have liked the Applejack being dominant part to last a little longer.