• Member Since 29th Apr, 2014
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Szalhi


Welcome to my unfinished fics. When will I finish one? Probably never. ZipporWhill is best pony. Cozy Glow is second best Pony. Angel is best animal, just look at him would you?

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That was funny! :rainbowlaugh: I love how it's like a tv show. Good job!:yay:

Hi-larious!! Definitely watching this for more chapters.:twilightsmile:
Also, do you watch game theory on YouTube? Your ending sounds a lot like how MatPat ends his videos.

good job on this, 9/10 celestias
:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

can't wait for more

DAY Z will be finished before theres another chapter to this, and a goddamn zombie apocalypse will happen before DAY Z is finished.

Interesting, I have the Mythbusters vibe from this (except that nothing exploded here). Is it crossover with that show?

Also, if the princesses are technically bald, how do you explain what happened to Luna between seasons 1 and 2? :twistnerd:

Anyway, I enjoyed this little read :twilightsmile: The only thing I was missing was some description of the surroundings. Where was Pinkie standing at the beginning that she could suddenly hop onto a train? Was she on the platform all along? Was she somewhere else and we are just missing the transition? (And no, the little disclaimer at the end is funny, but doesn't solve this.)

Also, spotted some typos and the like, I can send you corrections through PM if you want.

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I have a pact with myself that I would not edit any of my older chapters as a reminder of what I used to be.

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Okay, I think I can see what you mean. Though I doubt a little that some keyboard slip-ups can tell you what you used to be :derpytongue2:

Will this ever get a new installment?

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Maybe someday.

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All right then.

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