• Published 2nd Mar 2015
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Pink Tentacles - Ponyess



Pinkie Pie chose to take an early morning stroll along the streets of Ponyville, with only a trusty flashlight in her mane. There apparently was a lost Pony out there, a very strange one with tentacles for mane and tail.

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An Unexpected Visit: 3

Author's Note:

Twilight Sparkle's POV

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”Hiya, Pinkie. Who is your new friend, assuming she is actually a new friend and not just an old friend of yours I never saw before?” Spike prompted in a cheerful greeting.

“Hiya, Spike. She is a Tentacle Pony by the name of Tenacious Reach. If you could prompt Twilly to perform a spell before we get to her for me and my friend!” Pinkie Pie prompted.

“Hiya, Tenacious. Nice to meet you too. Every friend of Pinkie Pie is a friend of mine. I just can’t keep up with her or keep track of more than a few, I don’t have the capacity to recall details the way she does!” Spike complained, but with a slight hint of a chuckle on the end of the response.

“How many friends do you really have, Pinkie? Tenacious inquired in an insecure tone of voice.

“Aside from every Pony in Ponyville, and the other citizens of the village?” Pinkie put forth, giggling in amusement.

“In effect, you are friend with entire communities? My head hurts and I am starting to feel dizzy!” Tenacious moaned in a queasy tone, looking down at her hooves.

“I guess that comes with being the element of Laughter, but you should never question Pinkie Pie, even Twilight Sparkle gave up on that fruitless pursuit, Tenacious. Pinkie, what spell did you need her to perform, before she enters the room?” Spike inquired.

“Let’s see how about that?” Pinkie suggested, pointing a hoof towards her new friend.

“Wait, you want her to feel more at home, by making her stand out less among you Pony folk?” Spike then inquired.

“If any Pony could perform the spell, Twilly would be her, you know!” Pinkie pointed out in no uncertain terms.

“Oh!” Spike groaned; “You certainly got me there!” he then continued in a more clear point.

“What was that all about, Pinkie?” Tenacious asked.

“Some Ponies have been gifted with special and very potent magic and the power to use it for good. Even if they may stumble, in the beginning!” Pinkie cleared the floor.

“That would be Twilight Sparkle!” Spike put forth as he scurried out of the room in search of the Pony.


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“Oh, there you are, Spike. I was about to send Owlowiscious to find you!” I pointed out.

“Pinkie Pie was looking for you, Twilight. She just prompted that you use a certain spell, before you go. A new friend of hers is apparently a Tentacle Pony by the name Tenacious Reach. If you presented yourself as that type of Pony, she claims the filly would feel more at home!” Spike pointed out.

“Oh, Pinkie did, now did she? I guess it wouldn’t hurt to try that spell. We have gone wrong more times than not; when it comes to what she says and her predictions. The thrice damned little Parasprites were too close to get us all; if not for that insidious mare cunning and wits!” Twilight pondered.

“Owlowiscious!” Spike hollered, for the junior assistant to show his beaked face, as he was needed.

“Who!” the bird put forth as he appeared as if from out of nowhere.

“I need that book on transformations between Pony forms!” I then instructed him, only to see him fly off, once again.

Minutes later, he reappeared from a new direction, book in beak, just to drop it as I clasped it with my purple magic.

“Who, who!” he then responded.

“Thank you, Owlowiscious!” I responded.

Now I just opened the book and red through the tables of content in search of the spell I had been requested to use. Once I found it, my horn lit up and covered me in the glow of the intended spell, turning me into the form of Pony I had in mind. I just had to make a double-check in order to ascertain that I could revert the spell myself later.


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Once the spell had taken effect, I turned towards Spike. I soon found him exactly where I had last seen him.

“How do I look?” I inquired, as I faced my assistant.

“Exactly like Twilight Sparkle, but with these strange tentacles for mane and tail!” Spike responded.

Then I got the right spell, this was the look I was going for. I just have to get used to the tentacles hanging down my neck and flanks in place of the hair my usual mane and tail consisted of!” I pointed out as I started to move out towards the door.

“From the looks, you need to flex these tentacles of yours, or you will blow your cover!” Spike pointed out as he walked behind me.

“Speaking of which, you still better go and hop up on my back, just like you used to. I don’t expect to need you for opening doors, I could open them the traditional way if I can’t use my mane for that!” I responded as I stretch forth the tentacles that used to be the bangs of my mane towards the handle of my door.

“Sure!” he merely responded as he jumped up to what was his customary place on my back.


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“Greetings, Pinkie and Tenacious!” I exclaimed as I saw them where Spike had told me that they would be waiting for us.

“Hiya, Twilly. You do look great, today!” Pinkie responded as she saw me approaching.

“Greetings, Twilight!” Tenacious filled in as greeting, the next moment.

“I hope you are comfortable among us here in Ponyville. Pinkie Pie was nice to you, and not confusing you more than she had to?” I continued.

“The pink Earth Pony mare? She has been very nice, even if she seems to be incapable of being any less than confusing at every turn!” the filly responded, looking funny at the pink mare with tightly curled up mane.

“She is unsafe at any speed. Then she is bouncier than the most elastic rubber ball. Of course, she is also liable to throw all the parties in town, including the very best once a Pony, or Dragon could ever experience!” Spike teased.

“You mean; like this?” Pinkie Pie inquired as she started to bounce like crazy, up and down between floor and ceiling.

“And then, she swallowed an entire large cake, like a frog catches a fly!” Spike retorted with a grin all over his face.

“Wait, you can do that, Pinkie? I didn’t know a Pony could be like that!” Tenacious pointed out.

“Of course, silly Tenacious. Just like I can do like this!” Pinkie proclaimed, stopping on the ground and started to fly with her tail.


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“Oh kay, Pinkie Pie. That is enough!” I pronounced as I patted her on the back with an outstretched tentacle.

“These are the prettiest tentacles I have seen on a mares head!” Tenacious gasped.

“Thank you, Tenacious. Some of us work hard on maintaining style and finesse. Even though much of my times is taken up with my studies. Otherwise, I do have a few friends I love hanging out with. Spike is a great help in maintaining this place, with some help from my pet Owl Owlowiscious. Aside from Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy use to hang out with me too. You will see them soon enough if you stick around in town!” I pointed out.

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Comments ( 1 )

6533864 Assuming you are not referring to issues Canonically tied to Pinkie Pie, there may still be issues to address.

Sadly, I have no editor or similar help with my stories. I try to make due with the editorial tools like Spell check and Google translate.

I try to re-edit stories from time to time, I can always try to go over the story in search for anything I could improve upon.

There are a few instances where I notice typos, or missing words, particularly with older stories.

If you care to elaborate and point out specific instances, I would appreciate it greatly.

Thanks in advance.

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