nice bad thing is i need to wait for the next chapter XD but still nice i hope discord gets a happy ending ^_^ i gave you a few ideas hope they helped :3
Pinkie laughs over anything. This is Dispie after all.I think the "accident" Luna was talking about had something with the queen, but Pinkie will know it was an accident.
...uhm just saying you write about discort... the fact that your story is a bit caotic points out your doing a gread job! like discort would have sayed... ''what the fun in making sens? *chuckels*''
Usual spelling errors and some word choice confusion. Not really a fan of the inclusion of parents for Celestia and Luna; it takes a lot of the mystery of their origins, takes away their mystique. But I don't know, it could work; we'll see. Will continue reading.
I smiled at him before turning over and getting cozy. My last thoughts were of cupcakes and what kind Discord might like. He seemed like a chocolate and crisped rice kinda guy.
wung it? really?
also, the implications of this chapter
nice
bad thing is i need to wait for the next chapter XD
but still nice i hope discord gets a happy ending ^_^
i gave you a few ideas hope they helped :3
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Sure did!
Yeah... You'll see. You'll all see! xD
Pinkie laughs over anything. This is Dispie after all.I think the "accident" Luna was talking about had something with the queen, but Pinkie will know it was an accident.
...uhm just saying you write about discort... the fact that your story is a bit caotic points out your doing a gread job!
like discort would have sayed... ''what the fun in making sens? *chuckels*''
hey, I remember this story on fanfiction, congrats on getting featured.
Usual spelling errors and some word choice confusion. Not really a fan of the inclusion of parents for Celestia and Luna; it takes a lot of the mystery of their origins, takes away their mystique. But I don't know, it could work; we'll see. Will continue reading.
I swear there's a few moments when the POV just takes a 180 turn at the drop of a hat
And Fluttershy’s meant to be the kind one.