I'm liking where this is going. Pinkie Pie is in perfect character. Discord isn't the usual Discord, but your character interpretation seems to be ticking along nicely. The format is a good choice, allowed you to get a lot done in 1k words. Looking forward to more!
Thank you! I haven't read any FiM FF myself really (except for one really, really horrible discopie fic) I was hoping to show that the days with not a lot of words were days where he was dying of boredom, kinda give a feel of what it would be like for over a thousand years. I'm happy you are! I've got the next chapter ready, just need to type it up.
I've always found it interesting seeing peoples' interpretations of villains and figuring out what makes them tick. This is one of the more intriguing ones. I've always liked Pinkie Pie so that probably helps but I kinda wish that Discord had a way of communication with her... Maybe that's what Luna's for!
Hmm... I've heard of the expression watching grass grow, but counting the blades? That's something new!
You don't say? Hay, way to tell me of a slight error that happened once (without editing/having a beta) in a polite manner!
Next time if you have criticism or see an error, please do it in a way that doesn't make it look like you're laughing at the author. You might hurt a younger brony's feelings.
I'm not sensitive, but other Bronies might be upset by that type of comment... Like I said. The comment looks like you're laughing at the error is all. If it was just for laughs like you said, let's put it behind us!
DAMN IT! right when it was getting soo good it stops this is a GREAT story i really love it but dident like reading it only because it ended when it was getting sooooo good! i hope to see the next chapter soon! ^_^
Haha I know that feeling! Do not worry, I have the third chapter typed up, just looking for a beta I'll get someone to skim it but I'd reeeeeally like a true-blue beta. I guess we'll just have to wait and see
580165Well......I could be a proof reader....Is that similar? I literally almost NEVER have to go back and fix typos or delete extra words, so would that work?
If you would like to I'd be glad for the help! Anything you catch is just another thing I don't have to fix later. This is basically what a beta is. Just message me and I'll send you the third chapter
A few spelling mistakes, a few awkward wordings, and I find the journal format to be a strange creative choice, but overall okay and I admit I'd like to see where this is going. Will continue reading.
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I have a plan about his escape, though that is a very good idea!
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Please tell me what you think of the second chapter
I'm liking where this is going. Pinkie Pie is in perfect character. Discord isn't the usual Discord, but your character interpretation seems to be ticking along nicely. The format is a good choice, allowed you to get a lot done in 1k words. Looking forward to more!
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Thank you! I haven't read any FiM FF myself really (except for one really, really horrible discopie fic)
I was hoping to show that the days with not a lot of words were days where he was dying of boredom, kinda give a feel of what it would be like for over a thousand years. I'm happy you are! I've got the next chapter ready, just need to type it up.
what Chuckfinley said
Loving it so far n im actually feeling sorry for ol' Discord craaazy
btw is it UNO they're playing? thats gonna drive me mad now thanks
very intresting story, cant wait to see that rest :)
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No, not UNO keep trying! I'll reveal it in the next chapter
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Thanks! I hope you enjoy reading as much as I am writing!
I've always found it interesting seeing peoples' interpretations of villains and figuring out what makes them tick. This is one of the more intriguing ones. I've always liked Pinkie Pie so that probably helps but I kinda wish that Discord had a way of communication with her... Maybe that's what Luna's for!
Hmm... I've heard of the expression watching grass grow, but counting the blades? That's something new!
"The only people I know who..."
PONIES. NO PEOPLE.
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You'll like the next chapter or so, I can feel it
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You don't say?
Hay, way to tell me of a slight error that happened once (without editing/having a beta) in a polite manner!
Next time if you have criticism or see an error, please do it in a way that doesn't make it look like you're laughing at the author. You might hurt a younger brony's feelings.
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Well aren't we sensitive. I pretty much made that comment solely for the laughs, I don't see what's so hurtful about it.
this fic is great update soon (and i'm on fanfiction just check my profile)
568155 I'll be very much looking forward to it! Keep up the great work!
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I'm not sensitive, but other Bronies might be upset by that type of comment... Like I said. The comment looks like you're laughing at the error is all.
If it was just for laughs like you said, let's put it behind us!
oh boy! I can't wait for the next chapter!
ALLONS-Y!!!
oh boy! I can't wait for the next chapter!
ALLONS-Y!!!
I like this Discord way better. This is wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
DAMN IT!
right when it was getting soo good it stops this is a GREAT story i really love it but dident like reading it only because it ended when it was getting sooooo good!
i hope to see the next chapter soon! ^_^
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Thank you so much!
Next chapter will be up soon, just trying to find a beta
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Thank you so much for your kind words
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Haha I know that feeling! Do not worry, I have the third chapter typed up, just looking for a beta
I'll get someone to skim it but I'd reeeeeally like a true-blue beta. I guess we'll just have to wait and see
580165Well......I could be a proof reader....Is that similar? I literally almost NEVER have to go back and fix typos or delete extra words, so would that work?
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If you would like to I'd be glad for the help! Anything you catch is just another thing I don't have to fix later.
This is basically what a beta is.
Just message me and I'll send you the third chapter
anytime ^_^
just hope to see them have some fun hehe
Oh yes the read is quite good, and I enjoy the plot. Keep it up.
I have no idea how to put pictures on comments, but on mylittlebrony.com a picture says "Discord Ponified" and the picture is Pinkie Pie
619916 why does this fail to surprise me whatsoever?
Pinkie needed balloons
A few spelling mistakes, a few awkward wordings, and I find the journal format to be a strange creative choice, but overall okay and I admit I'd like to see where this is going. Will continue reading.