Happy Ending
IMPORTANT NOTE
My proof-reader seems to have AWOL. It certainly looks that way.
If this chapter changes don't be surprised, it's just him getting to me with whatever changes he feels are necessary.
Rainbow Dash woke from her nap atop a cloud. She looked around and saw that the sun was just beginning to set. As she stretched, she realised that she wasn’t alone on the cloud. Next to her was the still form of Post Haste, the stallion’s wings hanging limply as he lightly snored. Rainbow was confused. She was at least ninety percent sure that she had been alone when she had fallen asleep. The other ten percent, though, couldn’t help but feel that what she may have been dreaming might have actually happened.
Warily, she nudged him with a hoof. “Postie?”
Post Haste opened his eyes and looked around. “What time is it?” he asked sleepily.
“I’d say around five,” Rainbow replied.
“Okay.” The stallion stood up and made a show of stretching, flapping his wings to get a bit of feeling back in them. “So?” he asked.
“So... what?” Rainbow asked back, feeling very lost.
“So... was it as good for you as it was for me?” The stallion was wearing a sly expression, one eyebrow raised as he looked at the mare in front of him.
“As good for me as it...” Realisation came crashing down onto Rainbow like a tidal wave. “WHAT!?” she screamed loudly. “You mean... we.... but I... when... ARGH!” She threw her hooves into the air in frustration as she tried to figure out just what was going on.
“Err...” Postie looked around awkwardly. “Rainbow... I was just messing around. We didn’t actually do anything.”
Rainbow paused and looked at the stallion, giving him her best death glare. “What.”
“I thought it would be a good joke,” Postie said timidly.
“A good joke? A good joke!?” Rainbow yelled.
“Hey!” Postie felt a rush of courage and looked the mare in the eye. “You’re allowed to make me think that you’re having ‘happy’ dreams, but I can’t make you think we actually did something?”
“It’s different!” Rainbow said defensively.
“How so?” Postie asked with a mean smile, confident that he had just won.
“Because... uhh...” The technicolour mare had raised a hoof to punctuate her points but, upon realising that she had none, used it to face-hoof. “Fine,” she said in defeat. “There is no difference.” She pulled her hoof off her face and sighed before slumping into a sulk.
“Rainbow, I am sorry. I didn’t think you’d take it so bad.”
“Nah, it’s okay. I guess I deserved that.” She looked up to see the stallion was relieved. That, in turn, made her feel relieved. “So how was work?” she asked, trying to change the subject.
“It was fun,” Postie said with a smile, glad to leave behind the general awkwardness that had been their precious topic. “Except for when I had to go to the spa.”
“Uh, I hate that place,” Rainbow said with an eyeroll.
“It was worse for me,” Postie said, pawing nervously at the cloud.
“How so?”
“One of them... tried to... come on to me.” He chose each word carefully, hoping that Rainbow would find the humour in the situation. Unfortunately, she didn’t.
“What?” she asked, this time sounding distressed.
“Nothing happened!” Postie was quick to reassure. “The other one distracted the first so I could get away.”
“Oh. Good.” Rainbow smiled seductively as a thought crossed her mind. “I’ve got an idea,” she said, leaning close to Postie.
“Am I gonna like this?” he asked, a little worried that their snouts were almost touching.
“Oh yeah.” She pressed her lips against his and both pegasi got lost in the kiss, holding each other tight as though letting go would result in them losing each other forever.
Postie pulled away from the kiss and grinned. “I like this.” He leaned in to continue but was met by a cyan hoof.
“Come with me.” Rainbow waggled her rump before taking flight, a slightly confused Postie following. She led him to her cloud home and opened the door. “Go on,” she said, gesturing inside.
Postie stepped in slowly, wondering what this was all about. He had taken three steps in when the door slammed shut. He turned around to see Rainbow pouncing at him. He ended up on his back with a thud that shouldn’t have been possible. As he tried to make sense of what was happening, Rainbow pressed her lips against his. Taking his cue they embraced each other again, neither of them noticing the mess the room was in nor caring.
All that seemed to matter at that point in time was the pony they were kissing and how they felt in their hooves. They kissed as though their lives depended on it, as though to stop would be death. They lost track of the time spent in each others’ hooves, only knowing that it was unimportant. The stars could have died and the sun burnt out, and they wouldn’t have noticed, so lost in each other they were.
Eventually they stopped to regain their breath. “Is... is this going... where I think it’s going?” he panted, looking down at the mare he loved. Rainbow’s response was to simply nod before reaching back up for another kiss.
And they totally did it.
And that's it for this part! Stay tuned for the sequel. Maybe this time next week? I dunno. I ain't promising shit.
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"and they totally did it." always makes for a good ending
Oh.. My... Shit...
And I thought that this chapter was gonna be the final chapter, due to the fact that the word "Ending" is part of the title XD
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But it is!
I forgot to change it. One moment!
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There.
I hear a sequel??? YES!
"and they totally did it." i laughed and then i was sad because no sexy dashie time
Well, that was... nice.
FIRST, LEMME BE THE FIRST TO SAY THE FOLLOWING: Bow chicka wow wow, giggity.
SECONDLY, the sequel better include a pregnant Dash.
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Because that would step into clop territory and I have decided that it would be best to avoid writing such material until I actually get some action myself.
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Tony never does sex scenes...
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Simply because I need sex first!
It's only logical.
Did I just admit to being a virgin?
this is the greatest undersea epic ever filmed.
112249 you did, bro, you just did
just to make it clear:
-Rainbow panic because she thinks they did it
-Postie tells her they didn't did it
?????????????????
-They do it
Step 1: Joke about having sex with your friend and freak out your friend
Step 2: ---
Step 3: Have sex with your friend
Step 4: Profit
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It's more that Rainbow was freaking out because she thought she couldn't remember it happening. Then she decided to bite the bullet and do it.
...
Sequel.
NOW.
FLUTTERSHY DEMANDS IT!
I say the last sentence should be "And then they all fucked"
but w/e
I laughed so hard at the end i threw up. "I dunno. I ain't promising shit. " I'D PUT THAT ON A T-SHIRT. That's gonna be my new motto for life.
The runner up is: "And they totally did it." it shoulda been followed by "there's enough clop out there use your imagination, perverts."
Peace Out.
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You're right, I should have.
And, because no-one else has, Postie tasted the Rainbow. And you're all jelly.
Author, out!
Great story, I loved it.
(Brain-fart on spelling.
)
Looking forward to the sequal.
112249There is nothing to be ashamed of, you are not alone.
I hope that the next part will be out soon.
lol... need sequel NAO!!!!!
I laughed, genuinely!
This was a very fun and enjoyable read. Great job, Tony.
"And they totally did it." is the best ending to a story I've seen in awhile.
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when it comes to classic rock.... yes.
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ROFLMAO (rolling on the floor laughing my a** off)
"And they totally did it."
x infinity
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The option for a human tag was added after I uploaded this. Guess I never changed it.
... There should have been a sex scene "and they totally did it" is so inadequate.
twilight.ponychan.net/chan/arch/src/130810446819.jpg
Sorry but your ending reminded me of this picture
Please write more it doesnt have to be a clopfic but please wrrite more
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This was my first pony fic, what did you expect?
1287563 well, i think the newspaper episode(forget the name) sorta proved gossip is quite common
Meh
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If I did, that's just fucking terrifying.
....not bad
i guess
bu not ganna
Fav
Those last two lines made me LMAO
Should've been, "And then they fucked, and there was much rejoicing."
2483731 think about it. Hint: Bow Chicka Bow Wow!
So I'm looking back through ancient stories that I've been tracking and I realize I still had this old thing being watched. Brings back good memories!
If I were a first time reader on fimfiction, maybe then this story would have an appeal.
But, as I'm an experienced user and read stories from Amazing-to-Just Shit, I have to say, this story is the mediocre of the mediocre, this would be good if you just had started reading on fimfiction, but for someone like me? It's bland. Everything described here has been said and done in other stories, sometimes better, sometimes worse, but still done.
This story is like a staple, a starting point to start reading from(for HiE's at least).
Nothing amazing, nothing bad, just... mediocre.
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And I'm big enough to admit that this is shite.
Hey, it was my first fic, and I can't write some incredible epic on my first try. I was just following a path forged by hundreds of others before me, and taken by hundreds after. I had to start somewhere, after all.
I was not saying it was shit, its ok, just bland :P
I faved this right away at I ant promiseing $1@t
Finally got around to reading this one. Justin's kinda an idiot and there needed to be a lot more time time and reason behind him giving up his humanity and Raindow habit feelings after just a few days. The 'maybe you were always ment to be a pony' explanation was kinda contrived to explain why he adapted so quickly.
Still not bad. Better than most anyway.
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Like I've said before, this was myfirst story here. No surprise I fell into many of the standard pitfalls of the HiE genre. I've read back and I know just how generic this is. It almost hurts.
Still, I appreciate you taking the time and effort to read this.
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Yeah didn't read all the comments. I did notice the date on it though. Why not give it an update? I was a good story, it just needed to be expanded on in a few places, mostly to make Justin and Rainbow's actions to be more believable.
I'll get around to reading some of your more recent stories soon so I totally understand no imporving what is a much older and less popular fic.
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oh... thank you for that reply. 
i forgot i even made that comment
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Hmm. True true. Just enough that there are no ties.
That was an amazing fanfic and the end was funny too
(And they totally did it)