Hey everypony! I am acid the pony! I am on youtube and google+. I love fanfictions! so i make my own now. i hope you guys enjoy them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Something terrible happened in ponyville. Theres no way rainbow could create it! But when she receives a visit from someone, she falls under a spell but seems completely normal. But what what they don't know is what the mind controller is going to use rainbow dash for....
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I liked this.
I thought that this has numerous spelling errors, does not capitalize names, has a storyline that makes no sense, has ooc talk and actions from the characters, and has the characters doing things "just because".
I'm aware of the errors. But I will do that later. My main worry are to get ALOT of chapters out for your enjoyment. I'm also aware of the short prologue. I didn't have much to put in it. So I thought prologue or clues throughout story? I didn't want it to be mystery-ish so prologue was my choice. :P at least you know why rainbow dash got mad in the first place. Anyways expect that chapter 2 is already being made!
