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  • T Bad Habit

    Growing up is difficult sometimes. Scootaloo learns the hard way in a tale of coming of age.  · Mist
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  • T Bad Habit

    Growing up is difficult sometimes. Scootaloo learns the hard way in a tale of coming of age.
    16,584 words · 1,516 views  ·  85  ·  4
  • T Advance

    The age of technology has hit Equestria. Ponies everywhere are connecting in ways they never felt imaginable. In this world of constant digital connection, Apple Bloom is learning that things change as you get older...
    17,321 words · 543 views  ·  39  ·  1
  • E Just a Scratch

    Sometimes curiosity combined with boredom can get the better of us, Vinyl Scratch understands that.
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  • T Precious

    Fluttershy is going through a lot of challenges in her life, but could things be improving, or is it all just another hardship?
    18,519 words · 216 views  ·  11  ·  1
  • T Feel Good

    In a world where everything is just, Pinkie seems to always find something amiss, though she can't quite put her hoof on it.
    8,010 words · 220 views  ·  9  ·  1
  • T Яarity

    Rarity learns that somethings just aren't explainable.
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  • 13w, 5d

    I know I promise I'll stop dying, but I shall make up for it by dying again!

    Ahem... Yeah. Some may be wondering why I vanished so long and then suddenly pumped out a new story. Well there's a few reasons:

    1. I'm not a brony and my interest in the fandom is declining. So as a result my desire to work on stories is as well.

    2. Feel Good was actually a scrapped idea that I actually had 95% finished that I decided I didn't feel was worth posting. I revisited it this week and tuned it up and rethought my decision, ultimately deciding that I feel it was worth putting up in its finished state. I even spent a good 2 hours making a cover image for it (I normally commission one, but I decided to make one myself this time around.

    3. I got a new job recently that has me working night shifts, so I am exhausted most of the time.

    4. I am once again planning a trip to California to see my girlfriend again, so that takes a chunk of my time, and money to get commissions which I usually use for covers.

    5. I am working on a book! Not a fanfiction, a book-book. As in a book that you will be able to pick up on Amazon and read. Proceeds for the book will go as followed: 10% of profit will go towards CMT research, 20% will go to Amazon, 20% will go to the cover artist and the rest I will use to fund writing more books. The book will probably be being sold for $5 a copy or less, so realistically, I am only making $2.50 per copy. I might give away a few free copies and some limited time discounts. I am trying to move towards doing more professional work, so as a result, I may post here less.

    I will still try to finish stories that I have started or promised, in fact, the next part of the Like Me saga (is it a saga now? Meh, it's 4 stories long, it's a saga) is around... 55% finished, I just haven't touched it in like 2 months.

    I know A New Equestria fans: You want the next chapter. I haven't forgotten, but as I said, I did intend to do another pause after the last chapter, but more is coming. I might do the next major saga, soonish.

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  • 22w, 2d
    Another Update

    Hey guys, just thought I would update you on what I've been doing or working on. As you know, I posted a new chapter to ANE a while ago. While I am still planning on finishing chapter 40 soonish, I am trying to get work done on the 5th installment of the Like Me series. It's been going along slowly mostly because I moved and it's hard to find the time to sit down and write. None the less though, I'm a good 25% of the way in, and I will try and have that finished soonish.

    As far as A New Equestria goes: yes, I know it's approaching the 3 year mark and we're only on chapter 40, but hopefully I can finish the entire story by the end of the year (big maybe). There's a lot left to go over and the REALLY complex part of the story comes up very soon. Chapter 40 and 41 are going to kind of create some new questions I am sure.

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  • 54w, 6d
    On Vacation

    Hey, everyone! Guess what? I'm on vacation in California seeing my girlfriend. It's great. I apologize for the lack of updates, but I am like 75% through editing Precious, and I have a nice cover image made too, so I might be able to wait it up and put it out tonight. Sorry for the delays, but I don't get to see my girlfriend very often, so I am pretty distracted by that. Love you all, and thanks for your patience!

    Also I have chapters 28, 29, 30, and 31 for A New Equestria complete, so expect those after I finally get Precious done. I apologize again for leaving Flare's adventure on such a cliff hanger for almost a month, but trust me, what's coming is well worth it. We are about to see some interesting story bits come up that I've been pretty excited to get to. With Dash dead, there is a lot that is going to follow.

    1 comments · 78 views
  • 57w, 9h
    Updates 10/20/2013

    I know I post a lot of blogs, but I figure I should do something to let people know I'm not dead, and perhaps let them know what I am working on.

    So I am finishing up Precious, hope to do the final edits on it this week. I ordered a cover art for it, not sure when that will be complete, but look forward to that as well. It's about equal length to the previous story, "Advance" but it's a VERY different kind of story. It will of course set the scene for the fifth story in the series, and hopefully answer some other questions.

    Now, I am sure many of you want to know if I have been working on A New Equestria at all. The answer is: yes. I have completed chapters 28 and 29, and currently I'm working on 30 in between editing Precious. There are new characters being introduced, new saga, a lot of new stuff. I think you're going to like the new additions, it's going to change a lot of what you already know about the universe.

    How close are we to the end of A New Equestria? Eh... A while... I want to do about 11 more sagas before the story is over. So probably around 30-40 more chapters.

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  • 59w, 6d
    2 Years of ANE

    In 2 days it'll be 2 years since I first published A New Equestria on FiMFiction. To celebrate, I will be pumping out Chapter Twenty-Six today, and you'll get Chapter Twenty-Seven tomorrow. I figured I'd want to at least be at the halfway mark by the 2 year mark.

    To answer a lot of questions:

    -Yes, there is going to be a fight with Trixie, it's in the next chapter. The big "showdown" is going to happen after 25 chapters of build up.

    -Yes, Chapter Twenty-Seven WILL be what I consider "the halfway point".

    -Yes, we will be seeing Vinyl out on the battlefield again.

    -Yes, big secrets will be revealed.

    I will be making another blog after Chapter Twenty-Seven to sort of talk about the future of the story. Also I might try and put together a timeline.

    In other news: Precious is about 8,500 words in. I am nearing the middle of the story. I suspect it'll be a "little" bit longer than Advance.

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  • ...

Magic works in strange ways, and seems to manifest in every pony differently. It's always about how one uses their gifts that magic has given them that matters. Sweetie Belle has learned one thing for certain in the past few years, and that is some gifts can quickly turn into a curse.

Featured on Equestria Daily:

Update 2/27/12: Fixed a flaw related to the "Sweetie only tried once", complaint. It now explains she attempted a few times.

Also minor grammatical errors.

First Published
21st Nov 2011
Last Modified
28th Mar 2012
#1 · 138w, 5d ago · · ·

A lot more grim that I usually read; a very moving tale.

#2 · 138w, 5d ago · · ·

What happened here? Chapter is suddenly marked unread, all comments gone, huh?

#3 · 138w, 4d ago · · ·

Wasnt there another chapter after this one?

#4 · 138w, 4d ago · · ·

To everyone commenting my account was stolen and the person deleted my stories. The ratings and stats were restored but the stories themselves needed to be reuploaded in some cases. This is just a reupload.

#5 · 135w, 6d ago · · ·

*reaches the end of the chapter and flips the table*


#6 · 130w, 5d ago · · ·

Good story. You should consider writing/uploading another chapter if you're willing.

My original youtube account got deleted a while ago (still annoyed about that), and I have to reread this when I get the chance. My original read was absolutely horrendous lol.

#7 · 130w, 5d ago · · ·

>>631820 There is another story to this coming as soon as I finish it. It's already "written" it just needs editing and revisions now.

#8 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Ah, this one! I read it a while back and lost track of it. Glad I found it again.

#9 · 111w, 3d ago · · ·

Interesting story. Feels like one of those that could actually do great as a non-pony fic, though. While it would require more setting of characters...

This is a well done fic. I can't say I liked reading it...but it's certainly a...well, something. Emotionally moving. (Honestly, though...I'd be tempted if I was her to say it anyway..)

#10 · 111w, 18h ago · · ·

Nice story.

A depressing plot, but i like these kinda stories. <3

Very well written.

#11 · 110w, 6d ago · · ·

The end just made me want to hug something. :pinkiehappy:

DAMN you and your open ending.

#12 · 94w, 1d ago · · ·

Totally awesome!:pinkiehappy: And i'm going to read Bad Habits...... Tomorrow :rainbowlaugh: also the end made me squee in joy.

#13 · 93w, 1d ago · · ·

Great story. I'm glad she didn't kill her self. If she did I would of been so depress. The Whole reason I came here was to see anything new for A New Equestria but I took a quick look at your other stories and this caught my interest. Nice Job.:pinkiehappy:

#14 · 80w, 3d ago · · ·

I like this story. Conceptually it's a home run, mechanically it's certainly solid. Though my problem is with the characters; it feels like an outside story with ponies thrown into the mix. Our history with the characters just makes it less necessary to introduce and define them.

And I have to say I was getting pretty annoyed with Sweetie Belle throughout the story. I just couldn't come to truly believe her stubbornness on the matter and complete inability to tell someone before deciding to kill herself.

Liked the ending, it fit. Not happy, but somewhat comforting.

Solid little read.

#15 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2552218 It comes to make more sense in the sequels. The issue I had while writing was that I created a BIG story that couldn't be fleshed out in one story, so I broke it into 3 that kind of detail the rest of the issues. Plus you have to consider this has a deal of time passed from the series. Things have changed significantly. We're talking almost 3 years later.

#16 · 76w, 2h ago · · ·

Looks like I haven't fave'd this and "Bad Habit" yet. Let's fix that, shall we?

#17 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·

      You see, anytime I look at any pony I can when and how they’re going to die.

It seems you are missing a verb.

#18 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·


#19 · 70w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2894903 There are two sequels.

#20 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·

GAAAAAAHHHH CLIFFHANGARS!!!!!! all in all i loved this story :pinkiehappy:

#21 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3474779 There's 3 sequels.

#22 · 13w, 6d ago · · ·

It almost seems like she has a death note.

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