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A New Horizon

A Next Gen fanfic.

Fear strikes Equestria as the royal son of both Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight is kidnapped during an act of espionage by the Changelings. How will the main six and their children help find the young prince, and how will he escape from an underground army of love-sucking insects?

The characters written are owned by me exempting any pony that is not my OC. If you would wish to see more of them, go to my DeviantArt on unoriginai.deviantart.com.

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CryoKing96

CryoKing96 #1 · Feb 14th, 2015 · · ·

Don't know why this has gotten three downvotes, but no one is commenting yet. (Btw, First!)(Sorry, couldn't help myself.)

This is a decent story, maybe a little to tell versus show, but not glaringly so. And the lead up to Dawn's birth is a little to long. It might be better if you made it its own fic in more detail. Most readers will take Twilight and Tia already a couple in stride.

Hope I've been helpful and if I haven't, please let me know.

UNORlGlNAL

UNORlGlNAL #2 · Feb 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Probably because of the ships I chose.

I mostly chose to make this long due to most next gen fanfics having little to do with the parents, and my explanation of how Twilight got pregnant, etc. Each chapter is going to focus on each next gen, explaining how their parents got together, and expanding upon Dawn's disappearance.

CryoKing96