Sunset and Twilight

MRainbow Aftermath
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
After their defeat at Canterlot High, Principal Celestia directs the Dazzlings to undergo special mentoring with Rainbow Dash and her friends.
Sex
Human
Alt. Universe
Main 6
Sunset Shimmer
Adagio Dazzle
Sonata Dusk
Aria Blaze
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Super57

Super57 #1 · Feb 13th, 2015 · 6 · · Part 1: Initiation ·

ummmmmmm.........ok?

Super57

Super57 #2 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · · Part 3: Return to Equestria ·

.......All right.

Might've been weird....but whatever XD.

Fallen_Stargazer

Fallen_Stargazer #3 · Feb 13th, 2015 · 2 · · Part 3: Return to Equestria ·

Interesting little pervy read. For the most part though, the only thing I didn't really like/didn't click with me was that you wrote it as if sunset shimmer was originally from the human equestria, when its clearly stated she was from pony equestria originally. I know there is fan canon/fan interpretation, but a base fact like where she came from shouldn't really be messed with in my opinion.

donutwish

donutwish #4 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · · Part 3: Return to Equestria ·

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I agree with you on the point of Sunset's origination in this story. It was an unfortunate mistake on my part when I originally wrote the story in 2013. It's corrected in the sequel I wrote, which I'll upload in a few days. But it's been bugging since working on the new story and I was debating going back and fixing the story. However I'm not sure about doing that since the story has been out for a while on other sites, and I think people are generally against retcon.

NotEnoughBandAids

NotEnoughBandAids #5 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · · Part 3: Return to Equestria ·

Hey Donut, welcome to Fimfiction! I've always liked this series of pictures and stories, and I'm looking foward to the next chapter of the Dazzling's trio.

donutwish

donutwish #6 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · · Part 3: Return to Equestria ·

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Thanks! I'm glad you're liking the new story so far. The cover image for chapter 2 will be uploaded to Hentai Foundry and DeviantArt very soon. The third and final chapter is done and I'll release all three chapters here soon.

Buon_Luna