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  • Ace Combat: Wings of Unity
    Based on Namco's Ace Combat series of video games. A sequel to Ace Combat: The Equestrian War.

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  • Ace Combat: The Equestrian War
    Based on Namco's Ace Combat series of video games. No fighters or missiles, personal close combat.
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The Griffin Kingdom prepares an invasion on Equestria, and when the Wonderbolts are incapacitated by two griffin aces, a group of pegasus ponies, assembled by Firefly, becomes the land's main aerial defense force, supporting each other in the hardest of times. It's a story of revenge, friendship, sadness, struggles and sacrifices, a war which will change the lives of many a pony and griffon...

Status: COMPLETE.

This is the first story of the mini-series "Ace Combat: Equestria Chronicles". The story takes place some time after the second season of the show.

It is not a direct adaptation of any Ace Combat game, but it contains elements and references to the following games:

- Ace Combat 04: Shattered Skies

- Ace Combat 5: The Unsung War

- Ace Combat Zero: The Belkan War

- Ace Combat 6: Fires of Liberation

- Ace Combat: Assault Horizon

The "sad" parts occur every now and then, especially after chapter 9.

All chapters in this fic, except for chapter 15, contain links leading to themes from Ace Combat series. It's used to create an atmosphere. Use "Open in new tab" to listen to these themes. Expect ponified AC characters to appear ;)

It has a sequel:

Ace Combat: Wings of Unity

as well as a follow-up spin-off:

Ace Combat: Gryphon Wings

First Published
7th May 2012
Last Modified
27th Aug 2012

Comments ( 204 )

#1 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Dude, Ace Combat 4 is my favorite game of all time. I'll read this when I get the chance!

#3 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

>>554513 Seems based off Ace combat 5 Though

#4 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

>>554626

Yeah, I meant to add that I enjoyed the whole series, but AC4 was my favorite. Still going to read it!

#5 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

good to see this here! read some of the gdocs version but couldn't get into it having never played Ace combat

#6 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Usually i'm not into Ace combat - MLP Crossovers, But this is surprisingly well written. (And I'm not sure if you are directly following the plot of Ace combat 5)

#7 · Chapter 2 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

Lemme guess, the ultimate solution is a nuke

#8 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Ahh, so many references so far. Liking this story, must wait and see what happens!

#9 · Chapter 4 · 102w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Dark pasts shalt soon be revaled. Can't wait.:yay:

#10 · Chapter 5 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

I have to point out, there are quite a few grammatical errors. It doesn't change the fact that this is an awesome story, it might to the grammar nazis (and I hate when the comments are nothing but grammar nazis). Do you have a proof-reader going over your stories? Just saying, others find more mistakes than the writers (especaily grammar nazis, damn grammar nazis spamming the comments section with obnoxious grammar error corrects. (Damnit, now i'm ranting) I don't like grammar nazis)

#11 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

>>555369 Nope. Ace combat law dictates nukes are taboo. A weapon of mass destruction has to be cool (Giant cannons, big lasers etc.) and hard to destroy, but there must only be 1 or 2.

Remember:

Nukes = bad

War every 3 years = good

#12 · Chapter 6 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

>>556991

Yes but i do remember, something about a nuclear missle launching satalite that was also flying straight into a highly poulated area that was about to get destroyed. Maybe its just my imagination :trollestia:

#13 · Chapter 5 · 102w, 3d ago · · ·

>>555850

I don't like grammar nazis either, but I can't help making some mistakes. English is only my second language ^ ^"

Still, I'm glad to hear you think the story's cool.

#14 · Chapter 8 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

There better not be a "coming home" chapter. I'm going to say it now. There better NOT. BE. A "COMING HOME" chapter.

#15 · Chapter 10 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

You know, 10 chapters in and i see no refrence to gilda. I mean she has to be mention evntually!

#16 · Chapter 11 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

Now that i read this chapter, perhaps i spoke to soon last time :twilightoops:

I had a feeling Gilda would be the "Cpt. Hamilton" of this story

#17 · Chapter 11 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

>>561454

Not exactly Capt. Hamilton, but a different pilot from a different game...

#18 · Chapter 12 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

Wait... I've seen you from Youtube before. You were commenting on how you were gonna make a MLP fanfic crossover with Ace Combat and its true.

#19 · Chapter 12 · 102w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Youtube account: SonicTheHedgehog17??:trixieshiftright:

#20 · Chapter 12 · 102w, 2d ago · · ·

>>562868

Yes, that would be me. :twilightsheepish:

#21 · Chapter 1 · 102w, 21h ago · · ·

YES YES YES YES YES YES EYS YES SEYE YES YES YES!

I DONT CARE THAT THAT'S PURE GIBBERISH. Someone crossed over my favorite show with my favorite series of all time in my favorite world of Strangereal!

I have to say, although the wording for the intro is a bit weird, I like it. Waldreich Mountains did me in, methinks. :)

Can't wait to read more!

#22 · Chapter 13 · 102w, 19h ago · · ·

Well, im glad Mobius isn't going to be a "pop-in-and-out-whenever-he-damn-well-pleases" character anymore

#23 · Chapter 1 · 102w, 7h ago · · ·

>>569612

Thanks for kind words, though the story happens in Equestria, not Strangereal.

But you'll see some ponified AC characters in future chapters ;)

#24 · Chapter 14 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: Oh shit... we got problems!

#25 · Chapter 14 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

LA LA LA LA! Listen to our beautiful voice! This is AWACS Oka Nieba. That would mean "Sky Eye" in your language. I have a message from your boss, I'll patch it in.

Ace Combat 5 ftw :ajsmug:

#26 · Chapter 14 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

>>575791

I've actually made a full reference to AC 04 in there... but I suppose AC5 could work, too :twilightsheepish:

#27 · Chapter 6 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

>>555194

The fic has numerous references to the series, but is not based on any game.

#28 · Chapter 15 · 101w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Damn you and your cliff hangers! That is the worst possible way to leave us on a cliffhanger.

#29 · Chapter 15 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>579546

Sorry, but otherwise the story would've been too predictable :pinkiecrazy:

And no condolences for the poor ponies? I've actually suffered a mild depression while writing this chapter...

#30 · Chapter 15 · 101w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

>>581178

Well to be honest, i dont like posting comments with 19 emotes of rarity crying, but i felt pain.

Manly tears, they were shed

#31 · Chapter 16 · 101w, 4d ago · · ·

Cue the epic music

#32 · Chapter 16 · 101w, 3d ago · · ·

You need to play "The Unsung War" somewhere in here, like the final battle or something.

#33 · Chapter 16 · 101w, 3d ago · · ·

>>586395

Just wait for chapter 17 and you'll get one :raritywink:

#34 · Chapter 16 · 101w, 3d ago · · ·

>>588361

I have plans to put it somewhere (with a link to a PMV I've made before I've begun writing this fic) :twilightsheepish:

#35 · Chapter 17 · 101w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Faving and reading this later...and it's probably already been mentioned, but if this referencing The Unsung War....do we get a Razgriz mention in this? :rainbowdetermined2:

#36 · Chapter 17 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>595859

Razgriz is partially mentioned in the opening lines to the chapter... and there will be a reference to them in any of the last three chapters.

If this fic will be successful, I might condier writing a sequel :twilightsmile:

#37 · Chapter 17 · 101w, 2d ago · · ·

>>595905  Sweet! *makes time to read this*

:pinkiehappy:

#38 · Chapter 17 · 101w, 1d ago · · ·

ATTENTION CITIZENS OF GRYPHUS!!!!

A RING OF STEEL SURROUNDS YOUR ROTTEN CITY

WE WILL CRUSH ALL WHO RESIST THE WILL OF THE EAF

ABANDON YOUR POSTS

ABANDON YOUR HOMES

ABANDON, ALL, HOPE.

URAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh wait, wrong game:facehoof:

#39 · Chapter 6 · 101w, 22h ago · · ·

>>576839

You call it Ice Cage...but you don't play the song that goes along with it...or any of the briefing music...:pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

Good story, but that little quirk irritates me.  :unsuresweetie:

Silver out!

#40 · Chapter 1 · 101w, 22h ago · 1 · 1 ·

>>572349

Chopper better be in this! :trixieshiftright:

:twilightsmile:

Silver out!

#41 · Chapter 1 · 100w, 5d ago · · ·

"Hyper Drive"'s in my head whenever I think about this fic.

Wha's Hyper Drive, you may ask? It's the English opening song for Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's.

#42 · Chapter 3 · 100w, 5d ago · · ·

I seriously hoped you'd correct some spelling errors. For one, one of the lines had too many commas. Two, many of the words' tenses were wrong. I am disappoint.

#43 · Chapter 3 · 100w, 5d ago · · ·

>>615626

Forgive me, English isn't my first language. ^ ^"

#44 · Chapter 17 · 100w, 3d ago · · ·

>> PolishValsion

Something's telling me that if the Razgriz are going to appear, that might not end well for the royal sisters. :twilightoops:

#45 · Chapter 17 · 100w, 3d ago · · ·

>>627030

You'll just have to wait and see :unsuresweetie:

#46 · Chapter 17 · 99w, 5d ago · · ·

>>627205

Do you know where is polish version of this? because I found only 8 chapters on FGE.


Ps. z nicku wnioskuje że z polski jesteś. zgadłem? to ty to piszesz czy tłumaczysz. czy jeszcze inaczej to wygląda? bo ja już nie rozumiem.

#47 · Chapter 17 · 99w, 5d ago · · ·

>>648693

Yes, I'm both the creator and translator.

There are currently 8 chapters translated into Polish language. I'll start translating chapter 9 after the 8th one will appear on the blog :pinkiehappy:

#48 · Chapter 17 · 99w, 5d ago · · ·

>>649107

what blog? you crate this in English and then translate into polish? sorry for my asking but I am so confused:derpyderp1:. from where you are?

#49 · Chapter 17 · 99w, 5d ago · · ·

>>649275

Blog = For Glorious Equestria

Yes, I'm from Poland. First I write in English, then translate to Polish

(I tak, jestem z Polski. Najpierw piszę po angielsku a potem tłumaczę na polski.)

#50 · Chapter 1 · 99w, 4d ago · · ·

Finally getting around to reading this!!

:pinkiehappy:

Also found this.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8dCmaFJPfJw

So awesome!

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