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Blonde Blue Eyes


I am an avid gamer, writer, editor, reviewer, and critic. I critique/edit stories asked of me. I do not care for "direct" rape stories so please do not ask me to edit or review such.

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This story is a sequel to The return of Gabby Gums.


The impostor Gabby Gums has been stopped; however something even worse has happened. During their personal attempts to convince a pony named Jake to stop the stories, a tragic accident occurred. Applebloom ended up in a coma. Her friends feel obligated to save her and Zecora is more than willing to help.

Coverart is not my own and I do not claim it. You may find yourself confused if you skip the prequel story, or you may not. I recommend reading it first however.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

*sees cover art*
*reada description*

a tragic accident occurred. Applebloom ended up in a coma.

*looks at tags*

comedy

Wat.

Operation Blooming Rising is a go!

It is tagged comedy because the "Tragic Accident" was in the prequel not this one. Only the first chapter is going to be remotely sad.

Is Zecora not rhyming because you're no good at writing rhymes anymore than I myself am?

5644587 Zecora is now rhyming in all sentences to the best of my abilities.

OK i like the story but I saw a few mistakes, such as :know when it should have been known,noting when you need nothing, and most notably ;zecora not rhyming
If you would like I can help with editing for you in my spare time

Databit

P.s.
I'm that guy from fb with another PF

6858264 Yeah, I don't rhyme well. I normally go through and edit my material myself after a speed typing but have been too caught up in college work.

So, the girls' sisters and families are just going to be okay with them going on a potentially life-threatening trip with Zecora? :applejackunsure:

When will the story be finished

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