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Winter Tears

A certain pink party pony feels down under the weather.
A certain rainbow pegasus is there to cheer her up.

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xStellar_Bubbles #1 · Feb 22nd, 2015 · · ·

Oh cool, a new story from a new person, I see.

For your first, this fanfiction wasn't very bad at all. In fact, this was pretty great! The grammar was great, the pacing was perfect, and your details are pretty swell as well. However, I suggest that with every thought Pinkie had, you italicize it. That is all, and I hope to see more from you in the future.