It has been a week since Fluttershy took me in, and surprisingly all my my injuries are fully healed, but my body still feels like I’ve been ran over by a bus. Probably from laying on that couch for so long, but other than that I feel fantastic! I stretched my limbs and let out a long yawn, as I started to move off the couch, until I felt something nibbling my tail. Stopping, I turned my head to see Angel, Fluttershy's pet rabbit, being squished by the weight of my tail.
"Oops, sorry little dude." I apologized lifting my tail giving the white rabbit some air, who simply glared at me and hopped off. 'How did he get under there in the first place?' I thought but simply shrugged it off and moved off the couch to see if Fluttershy needed anything.
Speaking of Fluttershy, she was a great help with my injuries over the past week. She gave me medicine, food, and even a toothbrush while I was temporarily handicapped! It also turns out that she and her other friends are part of a group called the,,,,Helements of Armory....I think it was.....I don't know, I'm going to have to ask her later. Anyways after I told her I was lost (minus the part of being a human from another world), she told me that I was in a place called Ponyville in a country called Equestria.
Walking in the kitchen I spotted Fluttershy who seems to be cooking something on the stove, and it smelt delicious! "Good morning Fluttershy, watchya' cooking?" I ask.
"Oh, good morning to you too, James," she answers with a smile, "just making some pancakes."
"They smell good."
"Thank you, they should be ready soon." nodding in confirmation I sat down at the table, and started to hum a little toon. When the pancakes got finished Fluttershy brought them over and set my plate down in front of me while she put hers across the table. "You seem to be feeling better today." she says snapping me from my trance of the heavenly pancakes in front of me.
"Yeah, still a little sore though but I'll be alright." I answer cutting a piece of my pancakes and popping it in my mouth savoring the taste.
"Did you have a good sleep last night, because you sweating and moving around a lot." I suddenly stop eating the pancakes at the question. The truth is I've been having that same nightmare over and over again, where it is the same routine. My voice that sounds demonic.........purple ball of fire.....blackness.....and repeat. But I don't want Fluttershy to worry.
"I'm fine...it's just...uh....it was really hot last night." I quickly said mentally slapping myself from that terrible lie.
"Oh..um..ok?"
We ate in silence for the next ten minutes, I would catch her glancing at me from time to time and then quickly look away, but decide to shrug it off like I didn't notice. After we finished eating I thanked her for the meal and took both our plates to wash them in the sink.
"Oh, you don't have to do that." she protested.
"No, its fine," I say back, "plus you've been doing so much for me, it's time I did something for you."
"Well,..um..ok..if you want to."
"Are you ok? Your acting more timid than usual."
"Well it's just that..."
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
Fluttershy was then cut off by a series of knocks on the door. She excuses herself and walks to the door, I then heard her gasp from the other room making me nervous. I quickly jump out of my chair and made my way over to the living room to see Fluttershy with a scared expression on her face and the crusaders with guilty looks on their faces. Speaking of Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo ,we have grown very close in the past week, they apologized about the whole timberwolf incident, but I simply said it was fine. They have been visiting me, while I've been handicapped, to tell me about their adventures or to bring me some apple soup, but that's besides the point something was wrong and I'm going to find out what.
"What's wrong?" I ask lifting an eyebrow.
"W-w-well...um..." structured Fluttershy playing with her hooves on the round.
"We kind of......accidently......told m'ah sista' that, you were staying at Fluttershy's." said Applebloom.
"So? What's wrong with that?" I asked not getting why such it is such a big idea that they told someone I'm here.
"Well...Applebloom's sister, Applejack, didn't take it too well." added Sweetie Belle.
"Yeah, she totally flipped out! Before we could explain to her that you were really, really cool she took off to get the rest of her friends and are coming here right at this moment, to put you down!" exclaimed Scootaloo.
‘That’s not good.’ "Wait, then how did you get here before them then?" I asked.
"Well, duhhhh! We ran here as fast as we can when Applejack stormed off."
"Then what are going we to do?" I asked. Fluttershy and the crusaders all shrugged with sad looks on their faces, I can't just leave them. Maybe if I just fly out and.....no, because if what Fluttershy told me about Rainbow Dash being the fastest flier in Equestria, and this Twilight Sparkle being an all powerful alicorn was true, I might be in trouble. Fighting my way out is definitely not an option, since first I'll probably lose even though I maybe have at most seventy-five percent of my strength back, plus I don’t want Fluttershy and the crusaders to think I’m some monster.
"What if you just hide somewhere in the cottage, then I'll convince the girls that his was all a misunderstanding." suggested Fluttershy in her usually quiet voice.
"That...might work." I reply putting a claw to my chin.
Our attention was then interrupted from the loud banging on the door. The five of us jump in surprise and quickly glance at the door. "Fluttershy! Are ya' in there?!" called a female voice with a strong southern accent.
"Coming." called out Fluttershy before turning to me and the crusaders, "Girls, go take James and hide him in the kitchen."
The crusaders and I nod in confirmation and quickly and quietly head to the kitchen, "So where am I supposed to hide." I asked trying to find out where to hide.
"How about under the table?" asked Scootaloo.
"No, Scoots that's too obvious." I reply. I panicked as I hear the front door opening and quickly jump in a random cabinet and shutting it. I hear the crusaders groan in defeat outside the cabinet as I shuffle around in the cramped space and mentally cursing under my breath.
"This is some bullshit."
Fluttershy was taken back by her friends, barging in as she opened the door to let them in."Um...hello girls, w-w-what brings you here?" asked Fluttershy looking around nervously.
"Fluttershy are you ok?!" asked Twilight worriedly, "where's the dragon at?"
"Yeah! I'm read to pummel this guy in a pulp when I get my hooves on him!" exclaimed Rainbow Dash.
"Um..girls,,,if you might calm down for a sec-"
"Come on we gotta' find this thang before it hurts anypony else." said Applejack cutting off Fluttershy, "Don't ya' worry Shy, your in good hooves now. Now ah' want ya' ta' stay here with Rares here until we find this varmit ya' here?" Fluttershy sighed in defeat and nodded, knowing that when it came to Applejack's stubbornness, it would be like talking to a brick wall.
"Alright girls here's the plan," said Twilight , "Applejack you search the kitchen, Rainbow you got outside we don't want him trying to escape, Pinkie and I will check up stairs, Rarity, take Fluttershy back to your place and make sure she is safe. We'll meet back there once we handled the dragon." The six gave an affirmative nod and went their separate ways to find the drake, hiding in Fluttershy's house.
Applejack walked in the kitchen and was shocked to see the crusaders in the middle of the floor with huge grins on their faces. Judging from past experiences, she knew they were up to something. "Applebloom! Ah' told ya'll ta' stay at the house!" Applejack scolded.
"But we wanted to help and..uhh-"
"Get our cutie marks in dragon catching!" quickly said Sweetie belle saving Applebloom. James sat in the cabinet watching the whole conversation take place. He figured the orange mare, known as Applejack, tell the crusaders to go back to the to a farm. 'Must be where she lives' thought James as he immediately went stiff as he saw Applejack walking his way.
He covered his mouth with a claw too make sure his breathing wasn't too loud. Sweat now pouring dow his face he watched through the crack of the cabinet as Applejack was now opening and shutting each one. James' heart sped up as she got closer and closer, Everything went still as he saw her shadow consume the light in the cabinet.
"Crap, it's all or nothing." James said to himself bursting out the cabinets, knocking over Applejack in the process and running towards the set of stairs that led up to the second floor.
"Twilight! Pinkie! The little varmit is coming your way!" called out Applejack as she got to her hooves and ran up stairs following the purple drake.
I reached the top of the stairs and entered the hallway, only to run in the bathroom, hearing to more voices getting closer. I quickly shut off the lights and fly up to the ceiling and clinging my sharp claws in to it. I watched the door get surrounded by a purple aura and slowly open, to see two more of Fluttershy's friends walk in. One was a purple pony with a horn and wings, which I assumed was Twilight Sparkle and a pink pony, with a cotton candy like mane and tail, which I assumed was Pinkie Pie.
"Come out, come out wherever you are!" yelled Pinkie.
"Please, come out we just want to talk to you and ask a few questions." called out Twilight,Yeah, like I'm falling for that trick I think to myself. Getting ready to make my move, Twilight flipped on the light switch, they both looked up and saw me on the ceiling of the bathroom. Before they could react I shot a small ball of fire at their hooves making them jump in surprise, before dashing out the door closing it and locking it from the outside. Why Fluttershy has a door that locks from the outside I have no idea.
"Wait if she has a horn does that mean-" I was quickly blinded by a purple flash as the pony known as Twilight appeared in front of me.'Damn it! I forgot the ones with the horns can do that!' letting my instincts take over I lowered my body to the ground and showed my teeth starting to growl, intimidating her to back off.
Until I felt a rope wrap around my neck.
With a strong yank I was pulled of my feet and hitting the floor back first. Getting back to my feet I saw twilight unlocking the bathroom door for Pinkie, while I saw Applejack holding a rope in her teeth yanking me towards her like a dog on a leash. "Now are ya' gonna come with us nicely or do we have ta' drag ya' back?" asked Applejack struggling to pull me close to her but thanks to my increased strength she was having more trouble than she thought.
Until I started to rise up in the air.
I looked to see Twilight with her horn glowing suspending me in the air with a purple aura. "Please, just come with us we promise we won't hurt you." she said with pleading eyes. You know if I didn't have a rope around my neck like an animal and being held against my will I might have believed her. How did I get into this mess anyways?
A window then caught my eye, If only if I could get out of this grip, I think to myself, yeah there is probably another one of them waiting for me but I have a better chance fleeing to the skies than trying to hide in the house again. Concentrating I channeled the magic in my body to my horns causing them to engulf in flames. The three ponies surrounding looked in shock as I took the opportunity to use the magical embers on my horns to break the magical aura and using my teeth to bite off the rope that was around my neck.
I quickly made a mad dash for the window and stopped and turned back to see twilight, Pinkie, and Applejack still looking at me in shock.
"Sorry!" I scream out before jumping out the window and taking towards the forest hoping to lose my pursuers. My victory was then cut short when a blue pegasus with a rainbow mane blocked my way to the entrance of the forest, which from what Fluttershy told me was Rainbow Dash. "You have got to be kidding me!" I yelled before doing a quick u-turn in the air and zooming back to where I came. I looked back to see Rainbow Dash gaining speed on me.
'Fluttershy wasn't kidding when she said she was fast' I thought as I spotted the town, known as Ponyville up ahead. A bolt of magenta flew past me snapping me out of my thoughts. I turned my head around to see Twilight flying beside Rainbow Dash, firing magical blasts from her horn.
"This bitch, is trying to kill me!" I yell as I dodged another bolt of magic.
"Please, just stop I don't want to hurt you!" I heard Twilight scream from behind me.
"Says the one firing death rays at me!" I snap back, deciding to fly over the town trying to lose the two winged mares, until something catches my eye. There was Fluttershy walking with a white unicorn with a stylish purple mane I suspected as Rarity, since that's the only one I haven't encountered on this goose chase so far.
I pick up the speed trying to catch up to the yellow pegasus, but Rainbow Dash, noticing me getting closer to Fluttershy, had other plans and tackled me at the last second causing us to crash on the dirt ground of the town rolling like ragdolls causing ponies to move out the way. She pins me to the ground and rears back her hoof to give me a jab to the snout but thanks to my reflexes I push her off in one swift motion so can get up to all fours in a defensive stance against the rainbow pegasus. "You're gonna pay for what you done!" yelled Rainbow Dash giving me a death glare.
"What did I do?!" I asked in confusion.
"Don't play stupid with me!" she yelled stepping closer to me, "you'll never hurt Fluttershy again!"
"What are you talking about? Fluttershy has been taking care of me for the past week!"
"Don't lie to me! Fluttershy would've told us if she was doing something that crazy, especially if it's a dragon."
Without warning Rainbow Dash slams into me making me fall on my side, I quickly recovered and charged her igniting my horns in flames which she easily dodged by flying in the air. Rainbow then, with the speed of a bullet rammed into my side again causing me to yell out in pain and skid across the dirt. I get up and let out a ball of fire which Rainbow dodged, I let out a couple more one at a time but getting the same result with me missing her everytime.
"You really think you can hit me?" Rainbow boasted. She was right I can't hit her with just my fire blast....unless. I chuckled as I took a deep breath ready to unleash another ball of fire.
"Your really trying that again? I guess you're more stupider than you look!" she yells as I gave her a sly grin. She cocked her head in confusion at my response but soon her expression turned to fear as I launched not one but three blasts of fire at her at the same time. She managed to dodge two of them but the third one exploded right next her knocking her out of the sky and crashing to the ground.
As she slowly got to my hooves I stuck out my tongue in response causing her to enter a blind rage and charge me. Thanks to her not paying attention I simply side stepped her next attack and tripping her with my tail, making her fall face first into the ground. I mentally chuckled but only to get a buck to the nose in return. Now getting angry I launched another ball of fire at her hooves making her fly back into a cart full of apples. Before I could celebrate my victory though, I got hit in the side by something hot as I flew and collided to the side of a nearby building.
Dazed from the hit I turn my head to see the attacker, only to be met with Twilight once again. "Listen here mister, I am just going to say this once..NOPONY hurts my friends!" she says with a hint of venom in her eyes. I gulp in fear and got back to my feet, Twilight then charges up her horn causing a wave of purple sparkles and light to gush around her. She then unleashes a powerful blast of pink magic at me. I close my eyes waiting for the worst but nothing came, I cracked an eye open to see in surprise a fiery shield surrounding me. Twilight mouth was agape and so was mine honestly, mentally thanking God for this I let out a sigh of relief and the flaming shield dissipated. I then notice Applejack just arriving and out of breath, probably from running from Fluttershy's house to here, went up to Twilight's side and Rainbow Dash, who recovered, joining them as the three of them started to advance on me.
'Shit! I'm really in for it now!' I thought as I noticed the crowd of growing ponies observe my struggle with the three ponies, at that moment I knew I messed up.....until something or somepony caught my eye…...there was Fluttershy(along with her friend Rarity) with a look of fear and sadness in her eyes. We locked eye contact for a second before I broke it and let out a sad sigh,'I'm sorry, Fluttershy.' I thought solemnly as I gave a serious expression to the tree ponies in front of me.
Standing my ground showing no signs of weakness as the three ponies advanced on my position I let out a mighty roar causing them to cover their ears. I then concentrated all the energy in my body and transferred it to my maw, which was now glowing a bright yellow and orange. Twilight quickly casted a shield over her, Rainbow, and Applejack as I let out a ball of fire about the size of a small house. It impacted the shield causing a small explosion to engulf the three ponies. The crowd of ponies gasped in horror and shock at my new technique that I just learned.
As the smoke cleared I noticed that Twilight still had her shield(which now had cracks all over it) intact, and successfully blocked the attack, but I could tell she couldn't hold out much longer. She was sweating and her eyes looked like they might close any second now. Applejack and Rainbow glared at me while I glared back waiting on who will make the next move.......until I noticed something important.
'Wait? Weren't there four of them chasing me?' I thought before I felt a tap on my shoulder by a pink hoof and being hit in the face by rusty frying pan and collapsing to the ground.
The last thing I heard was the sound of cheering ponies and Fluttershy calling out my name before darkness consumed me.
That was over 3,000 words.... it felt like only 1,000 words... weird... but great story!
if you are going to give the main 6 the mental capacity of toddlers you may want to slap an AU tag on there
Yay moar!!
Oh hey another story where twi and co try to kill some one at the drop of a hat then get mad when they defend themselves.
Funny fact: 99% of humans will get knocked out shortly after arriving to Equestria,no matter what skills,experiences or strengths they have.
The harmonious ponyland is just THAT dangerous.
please update soon, don't leave us with that cliffhanger
It's amazing how stupidly both parties acted
James, instead of trying to explain himself, attacked them
The ponies, immediately attacked without question... AFTER they see fluttershy is fine
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(Still liked the chapter though )
Nooooo what going to happen why does the chapter have to end
Damn ponys and their violent behavior.
That was... Seriously, what the hell. I can believe the reactions at first, up until he started shooting Dash out of the sky. At that point it went downhill, and FAST- I mean, he tried to kill them. He knows they're Fluttershy's friends, the fuck. His fireball was strong enough to almost KO Twilight through a shield when she was already ascended? I call bull without some major power upgrades, especially since he just had trouble with timberwolves. That's a HUGE power disconnect, where the heck did he get all the strength of an alicorn in a week that he was resting? Also, Why the HELL would they have a justifiable reason to attack him in the first place! It would be one thing if he had badly injured the CMC or Fluttershy at some point, but he gave absolutely no reason for them to go after him. If anything, Twilight would be able to talk the others out of it JUST BY CITING THE ZECORA INCIDENT, as well as the existence of Spike, another dragon in the area. They know all dragons aren't evil pricks. Yet, for no reason, they deviate from character badly and... Yeah. I really don't like how this one played out, props to making the first part of the chase believable, but the second half and it happening in the first place... No, just no. I don't normally nitpick on a chapter like this, but IMO this could have been handled WAY better.
Comma after hooves.
Holy run on sentences, you need an editor for paragraphs like these alone... Also, you have a nasty habit of using present tense in these when it should be past tense.
Sentence doesn't even make sense in context...
More stupid or remove more.
Get yourself an editor man, theres lots of crap I didn't even point out...
Massacre them! Kill them all!
more please!
*irritated groan*
Stupid ponies are stupid again.
"Oh hey, its a dragon staying at Fluttershy which she is nursing back to health after it saved the Crusaders. Now way she would do that unless she is forced to! Im going to distract it with promises of just wanting to talk while at the same time chargin ma lazur."
"Yes, lets safe her and beat up the propably still hurt dragon!"
"Yeah, accent, accent, country bumkin bias, robe bondage!"
At the same time, James went a bit overbord to.
So lets say, both sides have fucked up royaly here.
Exept Pinky with her frying pan. Thats a classic. Works against coyotes, cats, swamp witches, elven queens and even against dragons.
See a pony, kill a pony; cause if you don't THEY sure as heck will at least try
I can´t stop myself to say, that i hope that he can be somehow equal with Twilight, and Rainbow.
How does it works, that always the fyin pan is the strongest weapon ever?, even stronger than any spell Twilight could cast?
Well thumbs up for the frying pan.
This was a nice chapter, and a good first fight for him, well after the last one.
While it would have been nice to have him as the winner, i guess this was more or less the only way, to prevent that he had to go somewhere else. He is still learning, and he was awesome for 75% of his power, and only the secon fight!
I like details, so can you make them notice their own mistakes?, like Twilight said she don´t want to hurt him, but tried to kill him every time?
This is maybe to soon, but i want it to be one of my favourites.
6169699 I can´t answer everything, but i believe whatever caused his transformation, is starting to set his powers free.
I understood it like that, he didn´t knew what they would do to him, since everyone was scared about that moment, and he probably only tried to knock them out, so he could escape, i don´t think he really wanted to kill them, regardless how strong his attack was.
About his strenght, i like to think that he just got really usefull powers, not that they are to strong, but the way they work has to be pretty usefull, don´t know if that makes sense through.
i agree with you, but i guess this is just suppose to show their usual reaction to those things, and this once i like it.
i can´t say much about english grammar, but i understand this sentence. I understand, that they think, Fluttershy would have told them about the Dragon (him), and would not do something like this behind their back, probably because they know she is affraid of Dragons.
6169615 Maybe both of them were stupid, but it was somehow funny, and it was a nice chapter.
6169601 frying pan.....that says everything...., or do you mean the first accident?
6169591 i honestly understand you, but somehow this is one of the rare times, that i think this chapter was just good the way it was, as long as they get their little punishment later.
6169567 I guess that means you liked it too right?
6169843 I do like it. *smiles*
Wow I'm really, like Really angry at Twilight and the others right now (Not flutters though)
Why is there so much space at the bottom? It feels like the word count is entirely made up out of it. I know it's not true... but it certainly feels that way.
6169699
Say what you will, I still had fun!
this felt really OOC for all parties, but still, I'll keep reading, but this stories on thin ice
well talk about a bad first meeting with them
well he asked for the chase scene XD
I think these reactions were way outta character. The mane 6 know that Fluttershy can deal with dragons when she has to, she yelled at that last one and it was bigger than the town hall. I can see them still being worried about her though and wanting to check up on her but they wouldn't have jumped straight to aggression mode. Also why did our protagonist not attempt to explain himself? He had plenty of opportunities while he was Yakkity Saxx-ing around the cottage. However I think the person acting most out of character was Fluttershy. Normally her shyness is crippling but when her freinds are in danger she stands up for them (again, like in Dragonshy.)
I think a more understandable scene would be if Fluttershy got hurt doing some work eg falling off the chicken coop roof while fixing it or something. When the mane 6 come around the corner to check on Flutters and this strange dragon, they see him looming over an injured freind and misunderstand his intentions and give chase. The injured Fluttershy is unable to follow to explain that he didn't hurt her.
Perhaps Twilight would magically restrain his muzzle to prevent him from defending himself with fire (a valid concern apparently) which would stop him from explaining himself.
6170065 I beileive it is because of AJ's overbearing protection of Applebloom, she heard about this and AUTOMATICALLY assumed that this dragon was bad, due to their previous encounters. Was it still an overreaction from her friends though? Yes.
An ellipsis is three periods, not 4 or 5. I love the story a lot dude but dang, do you need an editor. A lot of other mistakes in there too. For example, in one spot you use the word 'toon' when you mean 'tune'. It's little things like that that really detract from the immersion of the story. I'd be happy to assist you in editing if you should so desire, it's such a cute story and I hate seeing errors in things I enjoy.
Bunch a' xenophobia racist pony assholes I say. Spike is not canon?
This story is going to get shitty really fast.
6170076 Ok, it's conceivable that something threatening her family (honorary or otherwise) could give her tunnel vision on this, but what about Fluttershy? By not defending him she confirmed their fears by not contradicting them.
DAMMIT IT ALL WITH CLIFFHANGERS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
6170307 We all know how no matter what, Fluttershy is extremely shy...
6170338 It's about every week, so expect one 7 days from now :P
you know ive read situations like this in many a story and ive thought hey Equistria is in a world with many sapient creatures so WHY DOESN'T' THE PROTAGONIST PRESS CHARGES!!! i mean seriously hes a dragon a native species of that world he has to protected under some laws.
6170426 to that I say this.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IwfWCRLkmI4
Fluttershy is normally very non confrontational, but when the chips are down she doesn't just give up like this Fluttershy did.
The classic misunderstanding that became a fight that brings the main character unconscious , literally overused.
Are you using the powers from Skylanders? If so, I was hoping to have some of the powers from the original Spyro games.
James. Spyro. James.. Spyro.. James... Spyro... Jyro... Spames... Spyrames
More please.
6170076 thats true but there is one bit that doesnt make sense that no one seems to have noticed, just what the hell did the CMC tell applejack?
encountering a dragon sure would rile her up but how would she discover that the dragon is now at fluttershys? or why the dragon is at fluttershys? or that they were the ones that took him there? did they even completely leave out the fact that they encountered timber wolves? or that they were in or near the everfree? this encounter happened a week before the events of this chapter, I would understand the CMC not mentioning when though but still...
6170426
don't forget season 1 episode 2
fluttershys friends are attacking a manticore, though while it took a bit she still got through to them to stop, now for the dragon, I suspect she considers him a friend so she would jump in a lot faster to stand up for
Five bits say Fluttershy is going to be upset with her friends, ten bits says she uses the stare on them.
Also I really do think pony's are naturally specisesous. Prove me wrong, because of how many times they jump to conclusions I stand by it. I mean seriously in one of the comics the police force blamed dragons for the fires when it could have been a unicorn, I mean I'm sure there's a fire cutie mark on somepony. Also if your wondering a fire snail as causing the fire.
Another story where the main six are extremely racist and jump to conclusions with no evidence. How original.
6171531
Boohoo. How sad.
Yes it's unoriginal, but you have no right to complain about the authors universe.
6171531
Disclaimer: I'm not trying to be rude and this is just my opinion
If your friend was in a house with a dragon (which is is a species repeatedly portrayed in the show as violent) you would jump to conclusions too. Not to mention the fact that your friend is terrified of dragons. If I'm honest, usually in moments of like this you're not thinking clearly all you think about is your friend and not the dragon/offender. Also it wasn't really racist, all the dragons they've met have met have been dangerous or rude with the only exception being raised by a different species. It seems pretty natural and only fair to then categorize dragons as dangerous.
6171726 Except...
...
...He's been there for a WEEK.
Excuses? Only that, excuses. End of story.
More chapters required... ASAP or... whenever they're done... if thats ok
6171531 I kinda like it wether its original or not, so if you dont like it cause its 'unoriginal' then go and read something else rather than slag of the authors work.
6171765
I don't believe they know that, also she could be held hostage. Or threatening her. I agree that they are excuses for what is a cliché but things are usually cliché for a reason, for example the guy beats the big bad, if he didn't people would be dissapointed or upset. In this case, this chapter would have been rather bland without this scene.
6171416 Well just think...
anypony
everypony
somepony
All the names of the cities are horse puns, and honestly think of how few times there's non-pony characters that show up and are ever seen again.
In this case alone, from what the mane six have seen Spike is the only dragon that hasn't been mean of violent towards them. And Fluttershy is scared of dragons anyway so they wouldn't thinks she'd ever willingly let a dragon stay with her. They're somewhat justified in their reactions, though they are incredibly obstinate to the CMC trying to talk to them.
I don't think Spike is going to be happy with Twilight and others when he finds out about this.
They just attacked James just because he's a Dragon. Is this going to cause Spike to wonder if Twilight and the care for him at all?
Well mabee if the storyline was in the first season this might be believable. Everypony is ignoring the friendship lessons they have learned over the years. Fluttershy has learned to be more assertive and less of a pushover in the Iron Will and Flutterbat episodes. Applejack has learned to actually listen to her younger sister. Twilight should have seen that Fluttershy is not locked up in fear like she had of the big dragons. Pinky should have had a pinky sense thing for a new friend or something, not looking like a psychopath killer. The only one I give a pass to is Rainbow Dash since she didn't see anything inside.
Liked the first 2 chapters but this one is a let down for ignoring Everything how the mane 6 has grown over the years.
6171992 I know there's a reference for that they didn't listen to the kids, but I don't where it's from, I think it's 'no one ever listens to the children....!' The guy who said it sounded a bit insane.