This is just something I thought about one day and decided to play around with the idea of the Animorphs in Equestria. The original Idea came from the story titled Morphing is Magic (or something like that) I forgot the name of the author because I didn't feel like reading it so you know who you are and I would just like to say thanks for the inspiration. (The Gore tag is because if you have read any of the Animorphs books you will know that it has some pretty graphic descriptions of some of the battle wounds that they get.)
Animorphs is the property of K.A. Applegate
MLP: FIM is the property of Hasbro and others
Characters:
Jake-human
Rachel-human
Cassie-human
Marco-human
Tobias-human trapped in the body of a Red-tailed Hawk
Aximili-Esgarrouth-Isthill (Ax)-Andalite
The current ship list is as follows:
JakexCassie
TobiasxRachel
AXxTwilight
MarcoxPinkie
If you have read any of the Animorphs books and have a better shipping suggestion for Ax or Marco (or both) please feel free to let me know and I will consider it.
Ok this could be interesting. The opening with Discord is a little jarring and confusing as to what is happening it took my second read through before it came together. There are a few things that caught my eye and I will point them out.
1. Like the book series it would help if you list who is narrating each chapter so fans know who's point of view we will be seeing.
2. A little more reaction to what just happened as now Cassie who was on Earth, Rachel who was dead, and what ever happened to Ax just all appeared out of the blue and the people Marco, Jake, and Tobias where with are now gone.
3. Discord seems off in how and why he wants the Animorphs to be here and what he asked them to do.
I do not want this to sound mean and I will be following this story and wish you the best of luck!
EEEEPPP!!! Animorphs!!! I really hated that the show was canceled
I've read most of the books!
Gonna add this to the "Read Later" list definitely!
I really don't like the way this is written. Don't get me wrong, it's a decent enough idea, but the execution leaves sooo much to be desired.
I feel like Discord was OOC. He made the choice seem too obvious, life or death etc. the REAL Discord would have offered a chance to go to another planet (dimension, whatever) against the chance to go back. Marco then cleverly notices the loophole (5/6 of them being dead) and points this out, thus ending the debate.
This doesn't feel like Marco. Marco would probably have mentioned several times how his brain would probably explode from the weirdness, loudly exclaimed his disbelief at being on a planet apparently ruled by talking pastel ponies. He would most likely have speculated at it being a dream, and thus wished (vainly) for a cold Coke, followed by some hot chicks (at which point Rachel would point out that they wouldn't be interested in him anyway)
And finally, the meeting with Fluttershy felt too easy. She is named FlutterSHY for a reason. This just felt contrived, and fake really. Then, exposition dialogue. NOT A GOOD IDEA! Any necessary exposition should be done when the characters were introduced, not when they introduce themselves to another character. Not to mention that this is done from Marco's POV, but you're describing the actions as if Marco is 3rd person (if that makes sense)
That's all I have to say, besides GET A PREREADER, FOR CELESTIAS SAKE!!!!!
Please update soon.
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RTSgamer18 you have to fix your grammar issues. But other than that this story is great.
Nice to see this story back! Well the gang is all here so what will fate be throwing their way next I wonder?
Huh.......Rarity what are you doing here, other then what she just said about Marco, I got to say this story is great and I can't wait to see what you got planned for the next chapter and I do hope to see more Animorphs/MLP crossover fanfics on the site.
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