Kayaba has surfed the internet for some time and landed in one of the many worlds connected to it. This, Equestria as it is called, is now in danger and as he has grown attached, he feels he should act and act he did. Interrupting the last log outs of Kirito, Snion, Death Gun, Asuna, Silica, Lisbeth, Klein, Agil, and an entire guild, he now brings all of them, aside from Death Gun and the unknown users, to Canterlot.
It is now up to these people, of course Kayaba included, to save this world. Death Gun on the other hand has united with the other side to bring these players down.
In this terrifying endgame who will rise to the top and who with fall the furthest?
All Non-Show/Light Novel/Manga characters for SAO are based off of the members of the Knights of Harmony in a certain group.
Intruiging. I can only imagine how the conversation about anything related to Kayaba (his past actions, his world, his cyber-powers, etc.) would go. I'm definitely keeping an eye on this story.
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I'm always a sucker for an SAO crossover; let's go!
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While the base premise is definitely interesting, I must say that the execution so far leaves a little bit to be desired, In the span of only four very small paragraphs it goes from Heathcliff appearing on Twilight's balcony to him immediately pulling a tonic out of a menu, a tonic that one must wonder how he knew he even had, and immediately there after somehow has a crystal that he uses to teleport to Canterlot and is beseiged by questions from Luna right away.
That is a LOT to happen in so short of time, and I believe some changes to pacing and the addition of description and mental-emotional explanations could do this story a world of good, because it really is a good base idea. Also, you're REALLY gonna have to have a good reason for why Heathcliff would choose voluntarily to bring the likes of Death Gun to Equestria.
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It was exactly voluntarily.
He has all his old items from SAO.
The teleport crystal as well.
I can't wait to see how swords and guns and elf magic (oh my!) are going to factor into this!
interesting so ... what are the chance's he pulls his tower back up in this world given he's a gm and seems to beable to effect the land and like any other virtual world? ( wonder If his powers are similar to discord.)
also can he log out or is he getting the same treatment his players got, only with no know exit ... if so looks like you'll be stuck inviting from now on to get players heatcliff
dose that mean no snion from GGO ?
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yes.
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is this dead?
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No. I'm busy with other stories.
This chapter wasn't all that great, but it seems like this'll be a fun fic regardless. I'm looking forward to more, against my better judgement.
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Yay new chapter. :D
This has potential, but at the same time feels kind of rushed.
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Yeah, it'll slow down soon.
I'm guessing that rare avatar was migrated from Alfheim? I can sense a running gag with Kirito.
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Its was his GGO avatar.
This is very good
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Why was this cancelled?