"BeeBee"
This was so embarrassing! Having to stand here, on display in front of the room like some side-show act for the dignitaries, some of which she knew personally! She was never going to live through this, she was sure she was going to have an anxiety attack if one more pony awkwardly commented on her appearance, or snickered under their breath, or even just talked to her. Why couldn't this day end so she could hide forever in
an abyss and never be heard from again.
"BeeBee!" Oh no, please, why did she have to be here!
From the entrance, came Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, commonly known as Cadence, but even more privately known as Cadee. BeeBee and Cadee were the nicknames they gave each other growing up. Even though they're cousins, they felt more like siblings, always spending time together and hanging out, which made it all the more horrible for BlueBelle, she didn't want her to see her like this, she didn't want her cousin here! The laughs she could take from strangers, but from Cadence?! It would be soul crushing.
Before she could run or teleport away, Cadence was before her; staring at her new body.
"Hello Cadee..." BlueBelle said, slowly shying away from her and hiding behind her hair.
"Wow, I'd heard the news, but I just found it a little hard to believe... Did you really have yourself turned into a mare?"
"Yeah..." BlueBelle couldn't meet her eyes.
"Is everything alright?" Cadence leaned closer, trying to meet her gaze.
"Um, yeah. Yeah everything's alright. I mean, there isn't too much different. I'm just getting used to a few things."
"Like what?"
"Well, I'm a lot shorter than I used to be."
"Haha you're right! Check it out, I'm finally taller than you!" Cadence puffed up, reveling in her new height dominance.
"Heh, yeah..." BlueBelle's head lowered, a pit of sadness growing in her chest. Cadence's wing suddenly wrapped around her shoulders as she said,
"Cheer up BeeBee, you're going to be Princess of Equestria soon! You should be happy!"
"Mhm."
"Good morning to you Cadence," Luna said as she stood before them, "did you make the trip alright?"
"Oh it was fine Aunty, we even stopped in Ponyville to bring Twilight, she's staying in Canterlot for the week to be here for the coronation!"
"Really? I thought she wasn't coming."
"Well originally she wasn't, there's still so much for her to do in Ponyville now that she's a Princess."
"Hmm." Luna's interest waning.
"But since Shiny and I were going we talked her into it. She should be somewhere around here by now."
"The room's almost full," Luna gazed through the crowds, "I see the Saddle Arabian delegates, the Griffon Ambassadors."
"Ooo there's the Bat Pony delegate, I didn't think they'd be here during the day." Cadence said.
"How many more are coming?" BlueBelle groaned, all these ponies, and griffons and who knows what else! Here to stare at her.
"Not many," Luna answered, "Discord may or may not make an appearance, if the mail pony managed to reach him in time that is, so we're just waiting on the Duke and Duchess of Maretonia's family to arrive." Great, just what this party needed, a god of chaos, I'm sure he'd have loads of fun making jokes about her new body. BlueBelle walked away from his Aunt and Cousin, they barely noticed, still naming off the different dignitaries that filled the room. She wasn't paying attention to what she was doing, that she wound up bumping into someone. It's very impolite, and she immediately apologised.
"Oh, so terribly sorry, I didn't see you there."
"BlueBlood?" Looking up, she realized that it was Princess Twilight she had bumped into.
"Oh-uhhh... It's BlueBelle now."
"I barely recognize you." Her eyes squinting at her all over, "Were the Princesses really able to do this?"
"Yes."
"I knew Alicorn magic was powerful, but I didn't know it was this powerful. How did they find out about this? Is there a book here about it? I've never read about anything like this happening before."
"Your guess is as good as mine, Twilight."
"Don't you know?"
"No, they didn't tell me much aside from the fact that they could."
"I have to talk with them about this." Twilight's eyes sparkled with excitement, a short dragon rolling his eyes by her side. Though those eyes quickly fell on the food tables and he was gone. "How do you like being a mare?"
"Huh?" BlueBelle's focus from the dragon turned back to the purple alicorn she realized was also taller than her.
"I asked if you liked being a mare?"
"I haven't been one long enough to really say."
"Oh, well... Uh how about the Gala? Are you excited for it? Is your gown beautiful?"
"I don't have a gown, I haven't managed to get one yet."
"What? But the Gala's tonight! Where are you supposed to get a dress at such short notice?!"
"I-I don't know, maybe I could just where one of my bow ties, that would be fine wouldn't it?"
"But this is your first Gala as a girl, as my friend Rarity would say; you've got to look simply marvelous! Rarity! Maybe I could get a letter to her, she's the best seamstress around. She could make you something in time."
"No, you really don't have to." BlueBelle started backing nervously away from her, "Besides, I don't think she'd want to; I was a bit rude to her, she threw cake on me, we.. we don't really get along...."
"Nonsense, Rarity's always willing to forgive anyone, I'm sure if you both apologized, she wouldn't mind making you a dress, plus, she'd love the advertising either way."
"It's really okay, I'm fine."
"I'll send the letter right now! Spike take a...." Twilight spun around searching for her dragon friend, "Spike?" She wandered off in search of him, while BlueBelle silently sneaked away, hoping that would be the end of it.
Not many other guest talked to her, they mainly all glanced her way when she passed, muffled whispers followed where she went. How she wished to just escape from this torment, perhaps no one would notice if she left... One of the hallway doors was close by, if she managed to just make it past this group of ponies, she could head out, disappear, perhaps leave Equestria all together? It's not like ruling Equestria is that important to her.
She made her way closer, and just as she was about to make it out of the crowd, a large white looming shape appeared before her.
"BlueBelle! Just the pony I was looking for." Princess Celestia started herding her back through the crowd and away from the exit, BlueBelle tried to push past Celestia, get around her somehow, but Celestia expertly blocked every path while saying; "The Duke and Duchess of Maretonia have finally arrived and wish to meet you, I told them I'd introduce you personally and they've even brought along their son. Their Grandparents are here as well, though I believe they wandered off to find a suitable place to sit down."
They'd made it to the centre of the room even with BlueBelle trying to push past Celestia's leg, though she fell down once Celestia stopped.
"Are you alright Miss?" BlueBelle turned to the voice and saw someone she didn't recognize, he was a large stallion, much like how she had looked as a stallion, though with a rounder chin, and his coat was a bright white but had a colourful blue robe that covered his entire body, hiding his cutiemark. His mane was a dark brown, and bunched in curls all over his head, while his blue eyes gazed down at her.
"Oh, uh yes. Yes I'm alright."
"Let me help you." His hoof appeared out from under his robe, revealing dark hooves like his hair, she put her hoof into his and he helped her up.
"Thank you.."
"Indigo, Indigo Feather; Earl of Maretonia."
"Thank you Earl Indigo, I'm Prince Blu- Princess BlueBelle.."
"So you're the Princess, I don't mean to be rude but we were told that it was a Prince being coronated." He smiled as he talked to her, chuckling as he said it.
"Heh," BlueBelle nervously laughed, "There was some.. last minute changes..." She glanced towards Celestia standing with Indigo's Parents.
"That must've been so odd for you," he circled around her, forgetting what personal space was. "I mean, I can't even begin to imagine what you're going through. Has your mind changed as well?" His face suddenly very close to her own as he stared at her head, "Do you find kittens uncontrollably adorable?"
"I-I haven't seen a kitten yet to test it out."
"Well we simply must find one!" Suddenly he was dragging her out the door and down the stone steps of the castle, making his way to the city.
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It's a good thing Celestia forgot about Sunset Shimmer, or her whole argument goes right out the window.
Or Nightmare Moon, for that matter.
Hahaha! This is great so far! All of the reactions are pretty genuine, and the comedy is past the 'what-if' phase. Let's see what humors await our transgender unicorn!
This has potential, but if it doesn't end in the razing of Equestria with the towers of Canterlot burning to the ground I think it might be a little anticlimactic. </blueblood goes into season>
6014232 Sunset Shimmer can be considered an off and on canon character.
And so it begins...
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Well 9.5/10 you lost .5 because of how uncaring and arrogant you made celestia. I can't even think of her calling twilight a failure.
6014232 Luna herself seems to have forgotten Nightmare moon...
wow.... just wow.... all the characters here are characterized horribly. Blue
bloodbelle is the only one here who's character is completely out of wack. Celestia and Luna are complete assholes, and everyone else just seems to damn calm about it. No office but wanting to retire doesn't justify being dicks and forcing a change as drastic as gender on someone. As for it being comedy, well then it has to be funny for for that, I'll give you time, and I hope over that time the character get betterDeliciously evil fun!
Looks like the Princesses forget about Sunset Shimmer, Trixie, Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, the Dazzlings, Lightning Dust, Suri Polomare, Gilda and Starlight Glimmer, cause those mares would be such good leaders. You could even consider Spitfire a bad leader in Rainbow Falls. And at the same time also forgot Shining Armor, Fancy Pants, Starswirl, Sheriff Silverstar, Chief Thunderhooves, Seabreeze and King Aspen (from the comics).
I hope that Bluebelle finds a way to keep being herself without losing being himself. There a certainly feminine things she will enjoy but I'm certain that there are also masculine things he enjoyed before. And there is no reason that a different body would mean that she couldn't enjoy those. It doesn't matter what the rest of Equestria think, she's the Princess of Equestria, highest authority in the country. She can do what she wants.
Also hope that the romance tag doesn't mean that Bluebelle is suddenly attracted to stallions. The only thing that changed was her body. She has still the same cutie mark, the same dreams and the same wants. A different body shouldn't suddenly change who she is or was...
6073849 I wouldn't be so sure about the orientation thingy... I'm transgender and before I was on hormones I leaned more towards girls, but now I can't keep my eyes of men.
Also is this fic still alive?
I feel that the comedy of this series would be improved if Blueblood started giving as well as he takes. I'd like to see Blueblood start messing with Celestia and Luna with his new found power while looking completely reasonable to an outsider. It might be fun to see them realize that he's not going to let them retire in luxury.
"I can't just grant you two a pension because of your poor planning, that would be showing blatant favoritism! If you wanted to spend like you did as princesses then you should have put money into a better retirement plan. It's not my fault you didn't invest in a good 401K."
And so forth.
6018885 If you read the notes at the end of the first chapter, you would see that the Author recognises this.
c: I wuv it. Right more in your free time :D
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I know right, those nasty buggers just keep running off.
*reads summary* Once (s)he's in charge, can't (s)he just change the laws so that males can inherit? Or better yet, just have the princesses change the laws so he can?
6014672 (Tranny-in-Chief, Princess Poof, Queen Queer, BlueBorn-a-Man, Call me Caitlyn, I could go on forever)
Wheres the next chapter my br0? Its been like two weeks.
isk disapproves of this
6170882 I was thinking of going onto the next step and taking hormones. Whats it like? Pm me please.
6749321 Here's a question. Is there a law preventing males from ruling? I have read the summary, so I'll have to get to the story soon to find out. If there isn't a law, then... fuck them.
OK, gotta say, I love your story so far, most things about it are fine, but the one problem I have is just how forced the whole situation is, or rather Celestia and Luna. They're extremely out of character. You could never imagine Celestia practically forcing somepony to swap genders just for the sake of how it's mostly male rulers who end up becoming corrupt. I'm not gonna call it sexism, that'd be pushing it, but somethings a little wrong here. Did Celestia forget about what happened with Nightmare Moon? She was a mare, so it's not like they never do wrong. Again, really love the story, but I felt I had to get this off my chest.
Poor BlueBele, the karma is paying off
:(
I predict that had you continued this, Bluey would've become suicidal/bitter/angry-at-the-world, that sort of thing.
Keep it up! I love the randomnity! Wait a minute, was that actually discord in disguise?
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starswirl and captain hurricane are only pony males in story that're both powerful and have free reign.