Lyra Heartstrings has a knack for sniffing out mysteries, especially when they involve humans. The trouble is, everypony else thinks she's a bit crazy, silly, or just wasting her life. Unfortunately, when Bon Bon says the same thing, Lyra sets out to prove that her passion isn't a waste of time. For years, she's been gathering scraps of information, and now it's finally all come together.
There's a secret buried under the caves under Canterlot, and Lyra is going to uncover it, no matter the cost.
Written for EQD's 'The More Most Dangerous Game' and using the 'Anthropology' prompt.
Chapters (3)
Ha ha, great plot idea
Cool, here I was expecting some massive adventure until she found one. If this is chapter one I can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Also, small writing errors. In the second to last sentence you wrote "againsthis chest" I think you forgot a space in there. And,
Where
Anyways, hope I'm not being too annoying with the corrections... yet. Until next time,
-Sphinx
5544360
Thank you. It's something I've always wondered about ever since Twilight mentioned it in 'Art of the Dress'.
5544848
Fixed and fixed. I don't find it annoying. It's helpful, because it's embarrassing when typos are left unchecked for me. I can only go over a story so many times before my eyes stop seeing mistakes and my brain just auto-corrects it.
Anyway, the story's all finished now. Hope you enjoyed it.
No, Scorpio! Wait... I mean, yay, Lyra won! Ah, heck I have no clue. I was born under the sign of the scorpion so my like both of them. Oh well... Nice chapter anyways. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Is there a new princess I don't know about?
5554192
There is! She is my O.C. and I decided to introduce her in the middle of the fight. Brilliant plan, yes?
I definitely like where you started this.
Okay, this is pretty neat. Ars you trading on the fact that Lyra is a constellation too?
Yeah, this was fun! :)
5786158
Why hello again, Mr. Importnat FimFiction pony! Thank you again for not only taking the time to read another one of my stories, but leaving some comments. That makes my day, honestly.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I don't know if you read the notes, but it was a pain to write and get published. It kind of fell off the radar because when I got it submitted, I had forgotten to change it to 'complete' and thus it didn't meet the deadline on EQD. That was just the cherry on the top it seemed, but knowing that other ponies out there still enjoyed it and tracked it down made up for all of it.
I'm glad you had fun reading it, and now I feel rather silly for not using the idea of 'Lyra' also being the name of a constellation, or at least mentioning it.
Thanks again.
5786824
I just really like constellations. :D It's a slightly different take on Greek mythology + humans for ponyfic.