A mare sees Princess Twilight transform a group of ponies into Breezies. She knows this is her chance.
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What a lovely tale, have a watch!
That was adorable!
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Thank you and thank you!
Whether tis better to have loved and lost or never to have loved at all.
I have the feeling that being without wings will only hurt more in the future now that he has the memory of having had them.
That was... That was good.
The comment about 'only cast on a pony once' seemed to detract from it a bit, to be honest. I know the reason for it, to increase the level of bittersweet in the tale, but it felt awkward how it was just dropped in there.
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I'm well aware of that. I couldn't think of any other way...I spent a good twenty minutes trying to figure it out.
If you have any suggestions, let me know. I'm dying to change it.