Fluttershy, the calm quiet one is always there helping everypony, but when she needs help...is anypony there for her? She goes to Dash's house one night...just to say goodbye.
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Don't focus on what you can't do...but focus on what you can do to make a difference.
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Not a bad fic at all. Have a like
5587345
Thanks
Well this story. I personally liked it, even when the Dash felt a little forced at the beginning, but good non the less. Also I found some mistakes.
I think its "ever" and not "every".
I think u are missing a " after the don´t.
It´s "minute" not "minuet".
You did the same mistake again.
You are missing an "h" in "She" there.
It should be: You are not a mistake!
But like I already said this story is very well written. Hope you continuing writing.
I could really feel this. If you know what I mean. Bravo!
I could really feel this. If you know what I mean. Bravo!
5587683
Thanks for the advice I'll make those changes soon
5588002
Hmm...that's a good idea I just might do that.
5588473
I'm sorry to here that...
5588476 It's not your fault....
5588481
Well I know you don't really know me but if you ever need someone to talk to you can PM me.
5588486 I...I don't know that you would offer that if...if you knew how horrible my life has been...
5588497
Trust me, I've seen and heard some pretty horrible things...I'm always willing to help someone in need.
5588502 I....I just wouldn't want to be a burden...
5588506
You wouldn't, trust me...I feel so much better when I can help someone in need.
5588510 If you're sure, I....I'd kind of like to PM....
5588515
Yeah of course! In about ten minuets. I'm gonna be on the road for a sec. I'll PM you as soon as possible.
5588535 Alright...I'm not going anywhere...
5588537
Did you ever get my PM?
5589203 No, I didnt....
I cried! Great story
I cried, and that is my signal saying that this is a good story. So please, write on my friend. Write to your hearts content.