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DocMadfox
I write things. Feel free to commision a porn or non-porn thing for $0.01 a word. Price is per chapter.
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5517183 Exactly. (In other words she has no reason to be there and she was thrown in at the last minute simply because I like Slashy's version of Twist.)
5517399
But it makes no sense. Your excuse for the character being there is raisins.
Raisins.
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/5d/Sunmaid-Raisin-Pile.jpg
5517564 Edited it out.
5521189
Good, I would go over the whole story if you made that simple error.
5521227 I hate that I can't tell if this is a serious line of thought that you and others would have to downvote a story you never read because there was a joke you didn't like a joke in the description.
5521403
You can do better. Take this as my thought to do more then taking the easy way to get likes. Try harder and if this story gets two more likes, I will give mine. If not, the dislike will stay there.
5521413
Honestly, I'd rather have a like because someone read the story and liked it. Just like I'd rather hear from someone who read past the description and disliked it who can offer legitimate criticism, even if it's through a veneer of bile, rather than people who have nothing to offer to the conversation other than "remove the joke I didn't like in the description and beg for me to read your story".
So until you fall into either of those camps, your opinion is not even remotely useful to my goal of being a better writer.
5521435
Fine, here, have some criticism.
I dislike your story as you wrote something that doesn't increase your writing skills. Clop is just an easy way to get likes, the ones that don't get popular by being clop usually turn out like this. They don't fit the bill, but no one offers much because you don't improve a category that has nothing to build off of. So, don't write it unless you have someone experienced tell you it's good enough to get on the popular list.
dont understand the dislikes. i think this story is good
A zebra? Surprisingly rare. I love rare interspecies activity.
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You seem to be criticizing the genre as a whole instead of the story, and poorly at that. Telling someone they shouldn't write something unless someone better says it could be popular? That is extremely ignorant.
This was far too much like a hentai manga for my liking, but it did the job. Thumb up.
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) anyways, thumbs up for me, keep on with the writing 
I have to agree. This story is a bit...random for me to really like it. Then again, I normally don't read that many random ones unless they really chatch my interest. Anyways, I can still tell that it's decent and it gets the job done (got me excited, I can say that much