This fanfic attempts to answer the age-old question: What if a human found himself in Equestria? And what if that human was was one of the greatest actors in the world?
Follow his journey as he tries to get back home or at least get a decent cup of coffee...
My first attempt at an fanfic of any kind. Please give constructive criticism if you have any.
Enjoy.
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I have no idea who that man is supposed to be.
He looks a bit like Tim Allen...
I guess I'll give this a read, although the first fic warning and your
avatar do not imply a good omen.
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Tim Allen
I for one found this to be amusing, coming from one who does not usually read Human in Equestria stories, and considering this is your first attempt at writing, I say you did a decent job establishing the story. Still, it conforms to the tropes of the genre, so I hope you have some innovative twist planed that will make it worthwhile to follow. Good luck.
Soooo awesome!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Plus, I really like how you used an old actor instead of a more modern one. Not sure why you did it, but I love it~ <3
I never had imagined of Humphrey Bogart and MLP getting mixed up. I love his movies and now this - awesome! Keep up the good work.
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What?
He DOES.
Just a bit.
Humphrey Bogart on the front page of FIMFiction... you get +500 points for referencing him directly and an additional +250 points for knowing about actors from before 1982.
Be careful. I found an instance of "Fluttershy" not being capitalized. Other than that I have to say I prefer "famous human in Equestria" fics to "college kid in Equestria" fics any day of the week, so good luck!
Stranger In A Strange Land - Iron Maiden
Hmm, this has potential, but some of the dialogue is awkward. Also, don't you think Twilight would react to a strange creature suddenly reaching out and touching her?
Thank you all for your comments. I'm currently writing the second chapter and it might be done in a couple of more days.
This is a really splenderific, amazingly cool story! I wonder what or who the main antagonist is going to be.
probably the FBI, or Commies! Ooh, this is so exiting!
Um....yes. Definitely liking this story. Keep up the great work!
Feeling hot Mr Bog Art?
This is so bizarre but keep it up!
I feel so bad for only seeing Casablanca. I hope that there aren't too many references in this story.
Anyhow, keep up the good work!
Um, but they have got moving pictures. Remember the video in Hurricane Fluttershy?
Of course they do, but Bogart doesn't know that...
Next chapter's up!
Sorry it's a little bit wordy, but I'll make it up to you guys in the next chapter.
I like wordy!
The song about the mayor mare craked me up.
Oh and good work with the story!