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Architect of Realities
We are both the maker and the destroyer, our will bends and makes realms or agents whom act in our stead. Many fear us for we try to bring change weather great or small due to our scattered reasoning.
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Wow. That was badass.
Feels a bit rushed, but loved nonetheless
5503693 We ask thee to wait for more written later on, though we are happy to hear that thou considers our little human 'john' to be a 'badass', admittedly quite a few of this creations are too.
5503700 It may have been rushed from thy perspective, though consider how efficient these machines can be regardless of their comedy quirks. Also F.A.U.S.T.'s plans and simulations made the spectacle rather 'easy' since she caught them exhausted and their guard lowered.
Not bad, though you really, REALLY need an editor.
So, is this the real handsome jack, or...eh, but I look forward to this! (Aaaand great, now I have the thought of ursala in kingdom hearts saying that...)
5503737 We may have to consider this, as this reality's language has been a 'adjustment' towards us. Not that we feel bothered by it, just simply stating how we ENJOY typing with our tentacles!
5503740 Let us say that he was a normal human dressed as him, by some human name of 'John' something.
5503753
ah, ok then, interesting.
5503756 *points a appendage towards the blog for some info too.*
BUTTSTALLION! AWAY!
5503797 So thou knows, we are tempted to influence our little human into possibly foalnapping a Crystal Pony.
5503921 We thank thee.
#beststory
5503953 We feel our ego will bloat to that of a extremely fat hobbit if thou praises us as one would the sun.
5503805 Make sure the Crystal Pony is a mare. For the irony.
5504023 YEEEEESS....! We shall definitely include this, we thank thee. Though finding a DIAMOND crystal pony shall be a challenge, perhaps not, we did bring up a good point about them not having SEARCHED for possible living royal line. *places down a stereo and presses the play button with a thunderclap with manic laughing from Handsome Jack.*
5504037 *Awkwardly joins in with the maniac laughter*
5504070 The feelings shall feed our inspiration!
5504105 I can see it now
HJ "ButtStallion here girl."
ButtStallion "I told you I am a mare. At least call me ButtMare."
Hmmmm, very interesting presence. You writing style could use some refining, do you have an editor? It's not that yours is bad, just feels like the flow from one perspective or scene to another is a bit stilted.
If you do have one, I'd recommend checking out other fics for a hints and ideas, such as the following.
One of Many Fics I read
It's not the best example, but a good one. Give it a look over, and let me know what you think. As is, loving the idea of a Displaced becoming Jack and trying to do good. Though you might want to clarify how Tia messed up, her thought process, and her own realizations and attempts to change/mitigate her mistakes from here on. Also, Subplot with legitimate heir to Crystal Throne is a brilliant idea, I highly recommend going with it.
Best of luck!
5504253 First of all as we had stated before we have no mortal editor for our human(s) travels, secondly we shall read thy suggestion in hopes to improve ourselves. As for explaining why the demigoddess had assumed the worse she will explain it when the elements come, also her actions may have led to nightmare moon being born at the end when he was stoned.
As for the crystal empire we have felt irked that there wouldn't have been a direct bloodline hidden away in the city to save them from sombra's tyrannical ways, also our human being the one whom made the heart may have an easy way to find said pony, also the humorous antics to be had when they meet shall be glorious. a simple word will start off the 'odd' friendship, "Come Buttstallion I have come to take you out of this squallier and to your rightful throne!" a dumbfounded reaction by said mare and possible child. "I'm not this buttstallion but I'm a mare-" interruption by Handsome Jack "That's a small detail lets get you going onto the crystal throne, I've got my bots securing the insurgents for your judging!" As a possible to happen.
5504293
...Oooookkkkk, well, thanks for getting back to me so quick. If you'd like a...well, somewhat mortal hand, I'd be more than happy to help. Granted, my time these days is a bit erratic, but I figure I can go over some stuff if you'd like a second pair of eyes. That said I'm a HUGE Borderlands fan, so most if not all references, I'll get easily enough.
That said...ummm...hmmm...how do I put this? Buttstallion...ok, not gunna lie, every time I think of her, i think of Tiny Tina. And bare in mind, I know it's a stretch. But having Tina somehow get involved will likely cause any and all fans of the Pandoran persuasion to collectively squee and declare this fiction "The. Best. Possible. THING!!!" ...yeah, HOW that would work, I've got a vague idea that may resemble the start of a plan, but again, your call.
As an aside...well...I think we MIGHT need to contact someone for some fan art. A pony style Claptrap unit remains a bit beyond my meager imagination to picture...at least well. Beyond that, just let me know either via Pm or reply if you are interested. I know lots of other fictional universes, so anything else you want to throw into the mix, and at worst I'll just look it up and hopefully follow the train of thought.
PS. Replaying Borderlands 1, in Jacob's Cove...I LOVE Headshotting Zombies!
5503978 #praisesoontobefathobbit
5504372 There will be a coming in depth conversation over possible some form of lunch thy beings would call it, or simply a very dark room with thou held in our tentacle grasp as we chat and plot many things.
We had made a few thoughts on one to be similar to Tiny Tina, one of which was being another like Claptrap since F.A.U.S.T. had PLENTY of time on her OS to produce wicked things, one of which quite possibly being the accidental creation of the 'elusive' (NOT) Skag which roams the badlands.
We ask the many whom may read our story thank Isumo1489 For their labor into enhancing the emotions and beauty of our tentacle typing of keys. The Second chapter be what we speak of.
5514996 We wish to hear how thou thinks, as much work has gone into it so it is only fitting for further development.
This is good.
and I really want to see where this Nightmare Moon thing will be going.
Definitely an improvement. Before I was Just tracking the story but now I'm going to favorite it. Also I have a question, so it was Lilith who 'convinced' Celestia and Luna that Jack was bad, but Jack talked like it was a he.
So was Lilith actually a guy? Maybe I'm just confused as to who Jack was talking about.
This chapter is great. I'm going to fav it. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
5515358 he's talking about the merchant,I think. Well at least I assume so.
5515571 It seemed like he was talking about the merchant but the only person that I seen was manipulating Celestia was Lilith. It just confused me because he was saying 'he' when it seemed he was talking about Lilith.
5515587
Note, in the earlier bit, he doesn't know for sure if the Siren IS Lilith, and moreover the He was someone Jack had encountered that had him wind up in Equestria. As with most Displaced stories, Merchant is certainly the most likely possibility. And Merchant is likely the reason another Displaced WOULD be there...so 'Lilith' being there would be his fault. ... as for Lilith...well...not everything is always straight forward.
5515587 We may have had 'personal' events in our appendage when our little human was struck, change is always good entertainment for us, his tragedy and rage from before shall fuel his burning star to let us breach other worlds through what he sends!
*plays a possible future recording of Handsome Jack laughing with a purple glowing stare while his hyperion robots march through a wormhole possibly to other realities where other displaced may be.*
We so hope our little human will 'correctly' follow the path we lead him on, we would not wish to further 'correct' our little human to what he is meant to become, but like any parent one must be HARSH... *a shuddering cackle releases*
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^More or less my reaction to this...
Good to see a Displaced story that calls Celestia on her BS from the start and tells why it her fault everything going to hell
5715521 Well sadly we cannot see the link of thou reaction to jack's banter, though we promise he'll have more colorful reactions to come. He doth be quite angry for more than one reason.
more please also awesome chapters
5723656 We are working on more though we fear for the quality as we search for a humble mortal editor whom may bring it shine, for our clumsy inky appendages are often not precise. Since there is plenty of room for error when we drop humans into these universes. but if thou know of such resource we wouldn't mind advice for it.
You shold definitely cross this with "Hello, Stranger...." Surely these two can make some sweet deals.
I liked the chapter.
5745763 It may be considered though another crossover is being discussed and will be planned out before anything else.
heh that was funny :)
5745764 the next one will be along soon, though we still mourn for the passing of our last mortal editor. *in the background on a conveniently placed corpse wagon someone shouts.* "I'm not dead yet!" *uses a frying pan to whack Insumo1489 on the head to let him rest.* Such we shalt mourn his passing and bade him farewell by casting him out to sea on a Viking casket.
5745774 we still have more thou knows this?
Someone got the pre-sequel
5745784 oh I know.
5745805 Thou speaks of something? *looks around hiding possible story notes.*
...dang, you can do this stuff really well.
Also, now I have "Don't fuck with the saints!" In my head. (Saints row 3)
5745857 Oh? we thought that phrasing was familiar, it matters not to our little human as he does curse and break the forth wall since his imprisonment.
And just when things start to get interesting