Rarity tries a new spa

Rarity hears of a new spa in ponyville and gives it a try. She gets a pleasurable experience, just not how she had figured.

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RarityEQM #1 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · ·

“Welcome miss to the Relaxation Treatment center. How you doing this day?”

“Oh fine, thank you. I read the sparkling review of this facility in the papers and just had to try it myself.”

“Thank you ma’am. We promise not to disappoint you. Which treatment would you like today?"

“I’ll just take the standard massage today.”

“Right away Madam. Please follow me”

Ok, Right off the bat, where is this? Who is talking? Is this Rarity? Is she talking to a pony? A gryphon? A ghost?

“Such a lovely arse.” Came Batters voice, still rubbing Rarity’s rear. “You take exquisite care. Very little fat, but still big and beautiful. I can’t wait to play with it.” *SMACK!

Okay, wait, did you misspell your own characters name?

“Let’s begin” Baster said as she floated a bottle of oil to the table. The purple one with pictures of bubbles on the label. Baster hummed she flipped the cap.
The purple one? What purple one? Are there other colors? Where did she get the bottle from? You need to describe the room.

And yet, she wasn't in pain. It was quite painful, but she wasn't suffering.
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