Ryuu and Q have a long history--spanning some 3000 years. Their last encounter was on a planet called Pern--but that's a story for another place and time. This is their First meeting! And neither was prepared for it happening in Equestria!
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Well, after lurking about and reading everyone else's work, some quite good, I've decided to take the plunge.
This isn't quite the story I originally intended to write for here. But after talking with Ryuu from the old Pernese Friends website about getting permission to adapt his characters to a MLP story, he suggested some changes that I think has made this project a much better one. Plus, I really appreciate the efforts he put in to work out some physics issues with the Equestrian sun & moon.
A great deal of credit also goes to ZoidbergIsBestPony (even though I've not discussed this idea with him)--his DisQord Continuum series was a great inspiration for this idea. This is the first installment of 5 chapters, so please let me know what you think. I hope everyone enjoys reading this as I've had writing it.
You might want to rewrite, this story just seems to jump from one place to the next. Also quite a lot of cliche hie mixed in.
Sorry.
Oof. First thing I noticed this chapter was that Trevor talked a lot about the phone call that just happened, but he couldn’t have known about that phone call without his companions, so the lieutenant should’ve been suspicious.
As for the rest of the chapter, I got really confused as to what was going on because a lot of sci-fi terms were being thrown about in such quick succession it just made a confusing mess.
I honestly think I agree with dude5999’s assessment. This story probably needs a rewrite.