Ryuu and Q have a long history--spanning some 3000 years. Their last encounter was on a planet called Pern--but that's a story for another place and time. This is their First meeting! And neither was prepared for it happening in Equestria!
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God this is all over the place and I can barely read it.
Wait, what? That’s a... blunt opening. If you’re going to use “assets” from things people don’t really know about then you should really explain them before going into the story. An author’s note isn’t enough, it has to be explained in the story itself or it doesn’t stick. Also p, “things people don’t really know about” are things that can’t be assumed as general knowledge. Harry Potter can be assumed as general knowledge because it’s a popular movie and tv series. MLP can be assumed as general knowledge because I’d youre not on this site for MLP then there’s something wrong. Star Wars can be assumed as general knowledge because again, it was popular. Star Trek can be assumed as general knowledge because, despite it no longer being as popular as it was, people still know enough about it to understand. On the other end of the spectrum, the Warrior Cats series can’t be assumed as general knowledge because it’s not popular like Star Wars or Harry Potter or even Star Trek. You get it?
TL;DR you need to explain things outside of author’s notes.
To be quite honest I’d love to read a story that involved bloody panthers as companions, and the ability to turn into a dragon. Reminds me a lot of Animorphs.
Anyone got a link to where I can read this fantastical story?