• Member Since 6th Jul, 2014
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TheChosen1


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THIS IS NOT A HIE. *also the Anthro is because I found it hard to write fighting scenes with normal ponies* Swift storm lives in a world with no magic and only earth-ponies exist. Trouble finds him and ends up being whisked away to a world where magic does exist he learns who he really is and what he will have to do to protect himself and his new found friends.

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It is pretty good. add a bit more description and fix the pacing, and you will have a great story.:twilightsmile:

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