Although short, this was a great fic, and is there a sequel?

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I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm currently working on some Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash stuff, but I'm sure I'll return to more CMC tales eventually. I really like where the Big Mac / Sweetie Belle story went; I'll probably come back to that, too.

I think 'twat' was a bit out of place. I doesn't seem like Big Mac to refer to the actual thing with a derogatory term.

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I can see what you mean, but I just loved the phrase "tiny twat waggling". I'm a sucker for alliteration, and the double-T and double-W sounds just roll off the tongue. Also, remember that Big Mac is clopping by himself, and his thoughts get a bit nastier as he goes.

Also, see my most recent blog post about the word 'foal' and 'foalcon'. I would describe this story as filly-on-filly, and fillycon.

The word 'Twat' is a bit to british for big mac

not a huge fan of underage clop but i got myself to blame for that.

good fic though!

Loved it the hole way thru, if u ever get back to the cmc again.just throwing me 2 scents out there x but that's just me, again loved the play here can't wait for the next one

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Well when you say it like that, I can hardly blame you

I still think that foalcon roles of the tongue better. Also, horses grow quickly and then age at a slower rate. They would be 1-3 (but still not foals).
http://horses.about.com/od/understandinghorses/a/Comparing-Horse-To-Human-Age.htm

i.imgur.com/tfZQS.jpg

welshpixie.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/going-to-hell.jpg

How did I never find this story before? That was wonderful. Big Mac is so sweet Well deserving of a filly's love.

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Naw, this was exactly the kind of foalcon that doesn't get you sent to hell. All gentle and consensual and more likely to be remembered fondly when they grow up rather than causing any negative effect on their lives. Unless they get caught and horribly punished or family drama or whatever. But that would be the fault of the ones doing the punishing or drama making.

7308290 The ponies have boots. It was in an episode. Winter Wrap Up.

I just finished reading this with a friend of mine we both really enjoyed this story. I would really love to see a sequel to this with a lot more romance.