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The Batmane of equestria


I am Batmane. Shocker.

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I am Groot. Just kidding, I am actually just Ryan. A plain boy with a plain life who wants to make something of it by joining the army like his friends. But things are never that easy are they? EENOPE!

What if this plain boy with a plain life could make something of it? What if he could make a difference somewhere?

Life has something in store for this boy, and I sure as Tartarus want to know.


I hope you enjoy this story. Yes, it's a self insert. Watcha gonna do 'bout it? All comments are appreciated, whether it be grammatical errors, typological errors, improvements on what has been said, ideas for what should happen next, or just criticism, I will take them all into account.

I may ask questions in the author's notes so keep an eye out for those.

I have one proof reader, a Luna-tic, but I need one more. PM me if you're interested.

Finally, remember that this is a HiE fic, so don't discriminate it for that reason alone.

I do not own My Little Pony, those rights belong to Hasbro, nor do I own any of the things I may reference. However, I do own myself, which I find surprising considering my parents, teachers and colleagues throughout the years. Any resemblance to real people or fictional characters are purely on purpose. Do not consume with alcohol. Read label before consumption. If you are concerned about any reactions or side effects because of this product, consult a doctor or your GP. Terms & Conditions apply. See in stores for other offers. Please drink responsibly.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 19 )

I like the war-thing in the beginning. But the second part with Twi... Thats going way to fast for me. If a magical pony would crash into my house, I wouln't be like: "Oh, hey look: A friggin' unicorn. I'll go get my friends. Don't you go anywhere, okay?":derpytongue2: Still, I'll keep watching to see where this goes.

5467707 give the story a like then, I did.

5467863 I would, if i only could make up my mind about it. The start was so good. But the second half..:raritycry: I sooo need a second chapter.

Good so far little fast at the end but i like it and this is the first story that i added to my favs just by reading the description. More! pwease?

5468175 don't worry, I'm gonna start writing tonight and new chapter will be out in a day or two. Maybe even a few hours if I'm productive. Just keep an eye out.

Despite the fact that I too feel it goes a bit fast paced, it is still interesting. I would like a bit more detail and pacing but I can tell that you have some degree of talent (or just plain old hard work) put into your work. You're a good writer, strive to be a better one.

5469141 I have no editor as of yet so it will still be a bit rough around the edges. When I get one, hopefully it will get better.

One problem: Luna knows how to perfectly speak Modern English since season 2. Her usage of that old english here is OOC for her

Comment posted by The Batmane of equestria deleted Feb 8th, 2015

5701624 Except there are none

Should have kicked him in the balls or would magic have she same effect as steroids and make his junk smaller?

Sorry to say this but I never liked discord x celestia shipings I don't know why

6888341 I don't really ship it either, but it presented an opportunity so I took it.

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