This is my first attempt at a HiE fic. I know it's overdone but I can guarantee it's not a self insert. This time, anyway. But nevertheless! I digress! You are a human stuck in the oh-so-magical land of Equestria where there are trees and flowers and chirping birds and ponies and mythical beings who can cause a lot of destruction and death. A pleasant place to be.
Written in 2nd person narrative. No proofreader, so don't judge yet. If it becomes successful enough, I may hire one.
Rated teen for language reasons.
Chapters (5)
this story is like Mcdonald's
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not bad i shall follow
WAIFU STEALER! *throws tomatoes at Flash Sentry*
...I ship him with Sonata. :teehee:
Anyway, this is pretty funny!
how about you just shorted subconscious to sub con or mark yeah mark sound good
I really had a good time reading that.
"throws rainbow at twilight as a distraction"
"I shall take that as a compli-sult!" okay gotta say... when i first read this line i kinda thought he had a bought of turrets and called her a slut.
Yes, a brony in Equestria, let the chaos begin. lol
5520947 Chaos is always fun to have in a story. That is why Discord will be appearing in a few chapters
Phil, Jon, J-117,Bob, Aryco, or Sigma.
5544083 Just a tad late on that one, but good suggestions though. May decide to use one should I rewrite this chapter.