It's Cozy Glow's birthday! While her mother, Chrysalis, gets her ready, her father, Tirek, and uncle, Sombra, prepare the party.
What a great day it would be for the villains!
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Twi X Sombra is best ship, Luna is best princess, King Sombra is best villain, and Twily is best pony!!!!
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The first part of the sentence is a bit awkward and clunky.
They're
Aside from grammar issues, you have a good premise.
But in the opening sentences, you should set the tone of the story. Show them as a genuinely loving but evil family.
The picture alone is 90% I put a thumbs up on the story and the story itself please continue the story it's absolutely adorable
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Thank you!
Good story!! Very interesting setup with the four villains living together
I'd ask why Discord doesn't appear in this story, but having seen the last three episodes, it really isn't surprising. Please respond to this comment.
This is a great story, I bet you’ll make more great stories here!
Enjoy your day, be chill, and stay cool!
Your new friend, Rexy :)
Cozy making a birthday wish is kinda cute
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bro got reformed by a butter pegasus
Nice story! They family look wonderful!
This story is quite adorable and that Chrissy art activates some neurones.
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Thanks so much!
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No problem!
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Nah, Discord ain't exactly a villain anymore.
(And plus, I dislike the fact that he was Grogar all along. That was one horrible plot twist...)
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Wawa, thanks! And I will be writing a sequel to this story soon, so stay tuned!
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I guess. I don't exactly like Cozy so much, but you have a point.
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Thank you!
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Nice! I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us!
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I know! This whole story was inspired by that artwork! Chrysie looks so pretty!
And thank you!
interesting
I love the outfit and visual descriptions. Very nice.
The dialogue between them is a bit clunky, but that's about the worst I can say.
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Cozy Glow just looks so darn cute!
Looks at authors pfp.
yeah... I have no idea where Sombra went
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Oh you're so clever.
(But yes... The profile pic can kinda give it away... DON'T MIND ME!!! I CAN'T STOP MYSELF!!!)
Plz don't judge me...
Aahhhh!!! Villain family content!! FINALLY!!
you deleted the continuation of the story again?
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I've deleted a couple of my stories I just wasn't satisfied with. Sorry about that. For now this will remain a single one-shot.
Aww what a happy psychotic family
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i will never